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for How to Raise a Well-Mannered Puppy

by Rroselavy

person Hikari Raine
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW!!!!!!!!!! the end of the chappy was so cute. it was just awwwwwww. more more more

update soon

Ja ne
person silverfox
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice chapter and great fic now update
person Kodachi
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now they know about the whole dog-training/psych stuff... *snorts* No kinky stuff?

Anyways, that was a steamy scene alright in the car. I am guessing that that was an appetizer? I mean, it was in the car of all the places...

However, it's not over, is it? What happened to the plot, all of a sudden? I am trying to see if there are anything else... *shrugs* We'll see.

Kodachi
person Sydney
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so hot please right more!!! I love yaoi
person Reyn
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its amazing how this story went from silly fun to a more romantic genre nature.
person ayachan
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great! good! talking! ^_^ I've always been extremely depressed about Jou's abusive father, and the fact that most authors decide to just let his father beat the living crap out of him.. but this is the first story that there is some constuctive attempts of improvements between Jou and his father that i have read, and I love it! please keep up the good work and update soon!
person skywolf
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fan fiction :D Its so great :D
person Kugatsu
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I demand more!!!!! *sobs*
person mistryl
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is turning out to be a wonderful story and I can't wait to see more of it. Sorry I haven't been reviewing lately, been a bit busy.
person sharkbaitmoohaha
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg...I need another chapter and soon! I LOVE your story! Pleeeeeeease update soon!