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for How to Raise a Well-Mannered Puppy

by Rroselavy

schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woe. great story. I like it. I can't wait to read the rest. ^-^
person Kugatsu
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
bits and pieces you're so cruel....
person Maggiemay
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Does a squeee! Glomp* Hugs...OOO I love a scheming puppy. If you are part of Little_Dragon you know that dontcha...lol...keep up the good work.

Maggiemay
person ...
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well met oh holy author of the yaoi story 'how to raise a well mannered puppy".... woot! woot! i sense a lemon coming up! i can't wait, too..... unless... unless you purposefully got my hopes up for a lemon.... and then you aren't going to write even the least bit of shonen ai! shame on you! (that last bit only aplies if you do, truly, intend on doing what i said would be shameful if you did.... otherwise forget about it)....... and, back on track, yet another excellent installment of the story! (im too lazy to write the title again)...... so... icnat think of anything else to put.... so..... good job and please let there be a lemon^^....ttfn
person yukiko
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww great so far, but I see a problemcomming, I'm sure of it.
person nicky
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, I loved the bathroom scene!
Kisses can be so much better when they are secret... *sighs*

And I can't wait to find out what Jou intends to do.
Poor Mokie though, he deserves some time with seto...
person vapidbreath
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story. You have written the details of their relationship very well and I enjoy the emotion your characters express as you dwell deeper into their bond with each other. Please keep up the great work. If you can, please e-mail me when you update.
person silverfox
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lovely chapter very *interesting* so now update
person mistryl
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yah! Some ones gonna get it!

Another great chapter, and I'm almost sorry to see this story ending. It's so much fun to read.
person mofaf
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yippee, Jou is taking charge finally. Hope Kaiba likes the puppy treatment and enjoys what Jou is planning.