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for How to Raise a Well-Mannered Puppy

by Rroselavy

person celestial angel
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!! congratz, you finished this wonderfully awesme yaoi-tastic story!! yum. Seto and Jou are the bomb, and your the greatest! cnotinue another story soon! you definitely have the talents for it.
person Cody Thomas
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww what a good ending! that was really cute. mmmmm shirt tearing. and Jou got to be on top, yea! write more stories!
person Diana
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an ausomw one i wish you could write more i love this suff Its so hot Joeyxkaiba are a hot Couple!!:)
person icestar
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:whimpers: its over? ;_;

ah well. lovely story. very nice. ^_^ good job.
person ...
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*tear* it's over...... that was such a god damn good story......and thanks for that steamy lemon at the end! i think you're getting waayyyyy!!!!!! better at writing those hot sex scenes! ^^ (that was so awesome!) im glad you have another story on the way, and i look forward to reading more works by you! tata^^......(and i will miss reviewing to you until you get your next seto/jou story up! -ttfn-
person Kodachi
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sooo, the dog is dominant over the master... *snorts* Well, that was a pleasant change. I had no doubts that Jou would want to be dominant once in a while...

Final went ok. It didn't help that I had a headache at the same time.

I want to write more, but i have to pack (I live in a dorm and is now moving out...).

I can't wait to read more of your stories. They have a touch of reality to them, unlike other stories i had read. Believe me i read a lot.

Kodachi...

person nicky
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww, this was soooooooo good!
The story had everything a good story needs.
It was hot and steamy and at the same time cute and lovely and tender and...
*sighs*

it's a pity it's over, but i loved the ending ^_^
and I can't wait for the next fic!
person J.S.
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
noooooooo
how can u stop it???
just wen it was getting gud
update soon
person Hikari Raine
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww u tease!! you left me hanging. jaw on the floor hanging i can't wait till you have the next one up

person Maggiemay
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Decides whether on not to Jump off the cliffie you left...Okay, won'd jump as long as you keep your promise.

Maggiemay