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for How to Raise a Well-Mannered Puppy

by Rroselavy

person ...
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm..... i can't wait to see where this ends up ^^....... and i can't wait to see how kaiba raises a 'weel mannered puppy' *wink wink*....... i love it so keep 'em coming oky-day?
person yukiko
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey that's not to bad. the story is interesting, the plot not one-sided (just one idea and one action) I really like it.
person Kerurie-dono
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol i love this! Please update soon! i can't wait to see what happens next!
person mofaf1
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the chappie...hope to see Jou putting his psych to good use and train Seto to be a good blue-eyed guard puppy...all the while letting Seto think he is doing the training. Of course it will be nice to see the two boys playing chase on the track and maybe fetch with some of the other track equipment (if the track team is like the one my kids were on...they had to do a running and a non-running event each)...

can't wait for the next installment.
person icestar
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:sniggers: heh, always file any info that can be useful...

anyways, like the story. its very cute ^_^
person Kodachi
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For some reason, I got a bad omen coming... *sweatdrops* Not to mention an image of Jou-puppy barking and chasing after Seto's ass on the track... *double sweatdrops* Never mind.

At least, Jou got an opportunity before him in the future.... (However, can poor Jou have something to lord over Seto??)

*snickers* However, Seto reading that book and following the directions is hilarious. But how does food comes into play, according to the book? It's not like Seto is gonna bring lunch for the puppy, is he? I think Jou would just die from shock... either that or swoon and melt into little puddle over such gesture... *snorts* I can totally see that...

Keep up the inspiring work!!!

Kodachi
person Kodachi
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha.... *rolls around, laughing* Oh, my god. This oughta be interesting alright. I can't wait to see how Jou respond to this. I think it shouldn't be too blatant or Jou will take great offense to it. *snickers* But, I wouldn't mind seeing a cute submissive Jou for Kaiba.

This is too good. I should warn you though, that I might end up in tears from laughing too hard.

Kodachi *still laughing*
person Kodachi
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, it's Shizuka, not Shikuza... I was a little confused who you were talking about.

I have to say... Seto is a little paranoid, isn't he? I mean, he was bemoaning the fact that Kobi liked to follow him around, thinking that the dog knew that it was his decision who stayed and who got kicked out. *snorts* I think he's thinking a little too much here.

*snickers* Is he going to apply those to Jou? I would love to see Jou's face when Seto treats him differently.... *laughs* Man, I can't wait to see how this develops...

Kodachi

PS. I have a lot of free time, so don't mind me being early in my reviews.
person mofaf1
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love how the fic is starting out. It would be hillarious if Jou recognized the concepts that Seto starts using to try to train him. It would be even funnier if Jou was the one that ended up training his blue eyed guard dog...without Seto realizing it. (turn about would be fair play in this situation...and it would be hillarious).
person takky
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am very, very eager to see what happens next!