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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
At least, Kaiba isn't yelling at Jou a lot like usual... *snorts* He must be taking that book to heart. Riiiiiight....
Anyways, it got a little serious in that chapter. Hmm... I also like the fact that you put Kaiba in need of 'freedom' in running. Thanks god that Jou got a break from that whole 'alcoholic and abusive dad' thing... That was trying on me, so I usually get sick of those.
Keep up the good work! Get some lovey dovey stuff in there!
Kodachi
Anyways, it got a little serious in that chapter. Hmm... I also like the fact that you put Kaiba in need of 'freedom' in running. Thanks god that Jou got a break from that whole 'alcoholic and abusive dad' thing... That was trying on me, so I usually get sick of those.
Keep up the good work! Get some lovey dovey stuff in there!
Kodachi
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
<3 I really like this story. I don't have any comments in mind though... XD
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is so sweet...wonder if Kaiba will secretly help Jou get the stuff he needs for track....and still would like to see Jou be the one that does the training of Seto (while Seto thinks it is the other way around)...
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heh... very nice chapter.
Anyways, I love how jou is liking studying the intricities (sp?) of human nature. its an endlessly fascinating subject...
As for that book. well, t=its just too amusing. i know those tips are real, and i assume kaiba will notice jous actions are remarkably similar to mokies dog after finaly training it.
love this story. :thumbs up:
Anyways, I love how jou is liking studying the intricities (sp?) of human nature. its an endlessly fascinating subject...
As for that book. well, t=its just too amusing. i know those tips are real, and i assume kaiba will notice jous actions are remarkably similar to mokies dog after finaly training it.
love this story. :thumbs up:
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
snickers liked how ya endded that chapter of Jou chasing Kaiba's butt around the track...
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I thought that's what the teachers were brewing up! And I love how you ended it!!
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You rock! Two chapters in one day. I like the way you have Kaiba analyzing his past in a way that will create a path for change. Now begins the start of Kaiba freaking out Jou by being nice, or at the very least nicer. Thank you.
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH! I LOVED IT!! You're really doing a good job, do you per chance have problems with writer's block? I'm on my second week of one, and it really sucks.
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is such a freakin' cute story line... please continue!!!!
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww DIS FIC IS SOOO SWEET
i really like it
update soon its really gud
and i think there should b more seto and jou interaction ;)
i really like it
update soon its really gud
and i think there should b more seto and jou interaction ;)