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for How to Raise a Well-Mannered Puppy

by Rroselavy

person Anon
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh so cuteeeeeeeeeeeeee
person person
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Squeeee! Things are getting interesting. I really loved this chapter. I can acutally really relate to Jou and Kaiba. Such a good chappy. ^_^ And poor Jou, he fell down. *pouts sympathetically*
person mistryl
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looks real good so far. I enjoyed the amount you have so far.
person takky
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had the sudden imagery of the track team as a bad mob movie! *snicker* Awe, how cute. I think Seto may actually have made a little progress!
person icestar
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:sniggers: he obeyed his first command, im so proud... :falls out of chair laughing: sorry...

anyways, lovely chapter ^_^ :thumbs up:
person TrunkZy
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uhhhh! Me like! Jou and Seto are so in character! Not so often that happens! Keep up the good work. I like the whole track team thing. It seems like quite the idea. Glad you're not just making them say "I love you"'s and make them jump into bed! Wonder how things are going with the dog... :p
Thanks for the chappie =)
Ja Ne TrunkZy the Mighty
person KC
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cant wait for mroe ^^
person yukiko
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
is that a real book or not ? and cool, you update daily.
person cookie
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i like the story very much
pleasssssse keep on writing and update veeeerrrrryyyyy soon
buh-bye
person Nocturne22
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh! It's good to see something cute and fluffy instead of just pointless smut. (though that's also good...) Please update soon! Can't wait to see what happens!