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Goodness, gone for a day and I got three chapters to read!!! *stares at the last chapter* Well, that went so well. Who knew that Jou wanted to be submissive to Kaiba like that?? *snorts* Then again Jou couldn't possibly resist Kaiba after all. I mean, he is hot. *whistles in appreciation*

*snickers* I still couldn't get over how Jou was easily responding to Kaiba's treatment... *bursts out laughing* Man, you gotta admit that Kaiba was using the same tactics that he used on Kobi. Well, that last part didn't really count.

Anyways, keep on going. I really doubt that this is the end. *snickers* Right.

Kodachi

that was damn fast ya know lol

nice, I was suprise to see that much at once, I had problem with internet.
Mmm ... at least he stopped to follow the book but it was nice seeing he became more gentle to Jou because of it, and when Jou scraped himself and Seto wnt to see if he was okay ... sweet

Oh, I really like this story.
I'm usually not into all these 'dog and master' fics but this one seems to be special.
I love how bring in Jou's and Kaiba's thoughts and their reasons as to why they do something.
About the last chapter: my favorite scene was the part where the guys pack up their stuff... it's such a trivial thing to do that, but the way you let them do it just shows how caught up into each other they are and how little anything else matters to them at this point.

hehehe Good doggy!

I was talking to jou!

No! Update! You can't leave off there!

Okay, I'm calm again, great chapter, but anyways, bring on the smut!

I will keep this simple, You make me VERY happy. ^0^teehee

Yup, I still love you. ^-^ This is so cute! I really enjoyed it! The whole concept just amuses me so much. And apparently I have pretty good timing considering it was updated today. Go me! Let's see...

I really like the whole track team concept, both because I like Jou getting the attention by a teacher, and because I'd never even wondered whether Seto was in any clubs or sports or whatnot, and this answers that question in a way that makes a lot of sense. Plus, it gives lots of good opportunities for fun which you're nicely exploiting. ;) Great job!

YAY! MORE!!..... *wipes away tear*..... it just keeps getting better and better^^..... i think that you should have Mokuba come in in the morning because he forgot his school things or somthing like that....... then find jou and seto asleep together or something! ^^...... i don't know ...... just thinking out loud i guess!..... tell me, is the coach going to say anything or do anything about their (seto & jou) 'affection' towards each other? b/c he did notice didn't he? ....... aw well! ...... just keep up the excellent work, oky-dokey? ttfn!

hee.

yay u updated
dis story is so sweet
u got 2 get kaiba and joey 2 gether soon
please write more soon