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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is... AWESOME!!! update very soon! go PUP!!
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*tear* i feel so sorry for jou! *bawl* the story is just so good!!!!! *sniff* im glad he told his dad, though....and i can't blame him for finaly snapping and not wanting to take any more shit from his dad....even if it was at the moment of his dad's epiphany thingy (but kinda serves his dad right.)...... oh, and about the 'slight bondage'...... its okay, 'cause the bondage fairy's your friend^^ (lol) ..... any hoo- great update! i loved it (like all the other updates^^).... next time can you do the sex scene from more jou's point of view? i just think it would be interesting^^.....umm.... 'till next time!
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*claps* I demand more!
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow talk about revirement.
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uwaaa! <33 This is such a great fic! SetoJou 253%! Kukuku and things seem to be heading in a good direction for the boys! I was happy that Seto thawed enough to play with his puppy reasonably soon in the fic! <3 And your rate of updates is AMAZING! I envy your ability to be pumping out the chapters! Please do continue the good work! I know I'm at least greatly enjoying it~
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved how you portrayed Jou's dad here. I mean, not that I didn't like the lemon, hehe... On the contrary, it was adorable. But still the highlight of those two last chapters was definitely Jou's dad.
Also I remembered two things of former chapters that I found just great:
1) that Jou is thinking of tangents when he's looking at Kaiba................. lol, I can soooo understand why!
2) that Kaiba hisses "you think this is funny" at the other team members. That is such a guy thing to do. I've seen guys do that all the time, defending their friends. Also it totally fits Kaiba. He always does that, burst out with short remarks and at the same time get everyone so scared that they'd never try anything again.
Also I remembered two things of former chapters that I found just great:
1) that Jou is thinking of tangents when he's looking at Kaiba................. lol, I can soooo understand why!
2) that Kaiba hisses "you think this is funny" at the other team members. That is such a guy thing to do. I've seen guys do that all the time, defending their friends. Also it totally fits Kaiba. He always does that, burst out with short remarks and at the same time get everyone so scared that they'd never try anything again.
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lemme guess... he's running back to the one who did care for him, huh? *snorts* Running back to his master, I see...
And also, where did that explosion come from? That was a lot of anger Jou was spewing out.
*sighs* Do at least reassure me that Kaiba will do something about this, not just about dear daddy, but about Jou's explosion... That was a scary picture i just saw.
Gotta go,
Kodachi
And also, where did that explosion come from? That was a lot of anger Jou was spewing out.
*sighs* Do at least reassure me that Kaiba will do something about this, not just about dear daddy, but about Jou's explosion... That was a scary picture i just saw.
Gotta go,
Kodachi
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*waving herself* HOT HOT!!
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was soo nice. ^_^ *cant believe she missed two updates* Seto's silly sometimes...
anyways, lovely chapters. i hope its not over is it?
anyways, lovely chapters. i hope its not over is it?
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, hot and fun. Please keep up the good work.