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December 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't remember if I've reveiwed this before, but hey, the more the merrier. I love the way you write Jou and Kaiba, and how you work in the small things that make them who they are. I edpecially loved how Kaiba's claustrophobic moment in the apartment almost destroyed everything, because I can so see him shutting down right then and there. And I like that Jou father is an alchoholic, not a monster. There are too many stories where that man is demonized. I'll probably be back to re-re-read this at later date. It's a story you wanna read again.
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July 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A very nice change of pace after the roller-coaster of emotions that was Thin Line. And one of the rare times where Joey's dad is not a completely douche.
The dirty talking-- oh my, who speaks like that? Not that I'm complaining of course.
Hmmm... submissive Kaiba was kinda weird but yeah, still hot.
The dirty talking-- oh my, who speaks like that? Not that I'm complaining of course.
Hmmm... submissive Kaiba was kinda weird but yeah, still hot.
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! That was so fucking greeeeeeeeeeeat!!
Seriously, fucking awesome.
I liked how you made Jou's pop NOT be such a shitty person.
Usually people make him seem like the most horrible person on the planet...ALL THE TIME.
I loved this fic SO MUCH.
Thanks for writing it and putting it up for people to read ^_^.
Seriously, fucking awesome.
I liked how you made Jou's pop NOT be such a shitty person.
Usually people make him seem like the most horrible person on the planet...ALL THE TIME.
I loved this fic SO MUCH.
Thanks for writing it and putting it up for people to read ^_^.
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
beautiful. ^.^ I love the whole idea of seto realizing he could use a dog-training manual to help him figure out how to get jou. ^.^ absolutely hilarious. and I love your portrayal of jou's father; it's one that's not as common as it probably should be.
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Humbly bows to the great one.....catti
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Wow. WOOW.
I.. WOW.
*hopes for a sequel*
I.. WOW.
*hopes for a sequel*
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O___o brain... shut... down... i read the first few chapters at ADL, and couldnt wait long enough, so i HAD to come here and read it... my god that was HOT and sweet, and brilliantly written, you are now personally responsible for my brain meltdown- i'll send you the medical bill! Keep posting on ADL!!!
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice story
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it please make a squeal it be brilliant!
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dat's da end? ya gotta be kinddin' me!
Oh well! it was wonderful to read!
Oh well! it was wonderful to read!