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Wow! I am speechless. Good thing I don't need to talk to type! ^_^ You two are totally hilarious! Well, in a mean, evil, kind of way....eh who am I kidding, you guys rock. I wish I had the balls to do this, tragically that would take a very unwanted surgery so, um, yeah. Keep up the awesome work!

Hey.. This fic is great!

Sakura is an awful writer..

'fuckableness' made me laugh outloud and get a lot of weird looks.

Great job, continue ASAP..

Well, that was….painful, to say the least. Again I thank you for doing this, though I have this strange desire to maim and then destroy the person who first wrote this until nothing but their soul is left and then torture their soul for the rest of eternity. *smiles sweetly* Oh and by the way..*goes over to Lori and tends to her wounds* There you are. *offers pocky and some home made sweets to make you feel better* Keep up the good work, all of you. I know this is a very painful and excruciatingly difficult to deal with. I feel pity for your poor minds, just reading all the mistakes give me headaches. I can barely even begin to imagine how this person, or thing more likely, managed to get this far. *grumbles about those who can’t write and shouldn’t try* Well for all your troubles I’ve got a treat! *unveils a table overflowing with all foods imaginable and another table with plenty of drinks from water to whiskey and wine* Enjoy. See you all at the next painful chapter. ^_^’
Later,
Jade

*evil snicker* You're so mean, I fucking love you. Anybody who write such useless drivel deserves an MST like this.
X-P Rock on.

Uh, this line "'NO!' I can't fight them in this weekend state! I'll have to retreat!" also has an error... the wrong weakened was used, she used the one refering to Saturday and Sunday...

Well, I decided to review, even though I helped write it. XD hilarious, I must say....Oh, and Ryoko...you seem to like pissing on every one's good mood in the reviews you've left, so we're just gonna start deleting them....also, that's kinda interesting, the crossbow comment. O_o never thought of that...heh...oh well, it's not like we wrote the actual fic. Just the comments inbetween. *shrugs* Guess the retard thought it would be "cool" to have a crossbow with "magical powers." -____- Feh. Ta Ta, every one! ^-^

~Lor

O_o nooo! damn it! sorry ryoko, I guess I kinda got your name mixed up with "bunny on speed." THEIR review will probably be deleted, not your's! XD Sorry

~Lor

Oh gods! Kill me now! Such horrid writing! No based plot or anything close to it, hell this is completely random. I've read better stories from my seven year old cousin. Someone please, please, beta for this authoress! As I read this my eye started twitching out of control. I write fics as well and although my grammar isn't perfect and I have spelling errors I at least know how to form a damn sentence. >.< This is just horrid! And since when have Yami and Kaibe acted like that, really? Poor Ryou, I'd be scarred for life if a female like that liked me. *hands him a tissue and sleeping pills* If he's asleep maybe she wont bother him....or she may molest him in his sleep. o.O" I actually want to thank you for taking this fic and doing what you're doing, perhaps it will encourage others to try and use such things as a BETA and SPELL CHECK. They're such neat little things. *coughs* Forgive the sarcasm it must have been the 'sugar high'. Which that bugs me; if the damn person had no body then they couldn't have any desire for such physical items as food and what not for sugar and even if they did they wouldn't be able to have that sugar high. Couldn't she think of anything more orginal? *hears characters mutter: Obviously not.* If this authoress could get a well based and fixed plot and edit her grammar and what not, add in some original thought, and creativity while she's at it, the fic wouldn't be half bad. Who was the author of this by the way? Is it just we "bright" people who have noticed that most of the males on the Yu-Gi-Oh! cast lean towards being straight out Gay or Bi-sexual? Obvously so. I mean she does hint at F/M relationships but...well thats just poor Ryuo and Seto being subjected to torture. *pats their backs* Well I'll wrap this up, shall I? Great work, good luck with the rest, and try to keep sane among the spelling errors, and what not! ^_^ Ja!
*~* Jade *~*

Duuuuuude! That was awesome! I love this story, it brings attention to how much complete, utter CRAP is polluting this fandom. It's amazing really, a year or two ago it wasn't nearly so bad but every since Yu-Gi-Oh! became the next 'Pokemon' cash cow for Kids 4, or whatever the hell the company is called, everything has gone down in smoke, flames, and "ilteracy".

Ooooh, where have all the good fics gone, oh where, oh where could they be? :_(

I'm rambling now, but good work!! This was friggin hilarious! :D

-Amy

I just finished reading the four chapters that have been posted for "The New Girl - Perfection Has Landed". I was laughing the entire time.

In the future, you may want to use a word processor, like MicrosoftWord or something. It tells you when a word is spelled wrong and of bad grammar. (I'm a journalism student, English is my native language, and all your mistakes are driving me up a wall. I'd say insane, but I already am...)

The main reason I've made it this far into the fic is because of the character's comments. If they weren't there, and so highly amusing, I probably would have stopped reading.

Please, try to improve the spelling and grammar. It's a great idea for a plot...but some work is needed on it.

Keep trying though, everyone needs their entertainment!

Thanks,
Yume no Kareta