The New Girl - Perfection has Landed!

Lori: We're bored...we're mean.... this fic is born! *dramatic sound effects*

Phantom_Panther: I feel so horrible doing this… but I’m afraid it must be done… sooner or later.

Kaiba: Must you?

Lori: Yes, we must.

Jou: Might as well straightjacket me here and now! *rocks*

Phantom_Panther: -_- well, as mean as feel right now, let us begin the torment. Oh, and we will be commenting throughout this whole fic, for your entertainment, of course.

Lori: LET THE BASHING BEGIN!! *pulls out random sharp objects*


The New Girl

Sakura: First here is my bio. For the sake of this story Sakura, not me! But she has the same deck and same yamis as me. So Cala and Caru will play that part. Name: Sakura Kodasawa Age: 16 Height: Same as Ryou's Weight: ? Hair: Brown with Black and blonde highlights Eyes: Emrald Green Previous home: Osaka

Ryou: Same as MY height? I’m not that frickin’ short am I?!

Mai: And for the record, hon, “emrald” is spelt with two e’s. Emerald.

Attitude: Kind, fairly friendly, just don't get her angry! When she duels she changes into a serious person who won't give up, she stays cool and collected in even the toughest situations, but on occasion may get really upset.

Kaiba: Ooh, bipolar, huh? I’m shaking in my trenchcoat.

Yami: Touché e_e

Millennium Item: Millennium Cross Bow.

It's Powers: When it's arrow is shot it can send an evil soul to the shadow realm if she wants to, a good one will stay. It can also turn into a charm on a necklace or ankle bracelet so it won't get any attention. Problem power: To keep it's magic, once in a while it will steal Sakura's energy to re-power itself. Sakura is stuck in bed and out of energy on those days. Takes three days to recharge. Also takes energy when a evil 'villan' is near. But doesn't take much.

Lori: Ummm...ok....watch Inu-Yasha much?

Bakura: Sounds like she’s just on her period to me.

PP: -_- I can’t TAKE this HORRIBLE grammar and spelling ANY LONGER!! It’s not “a evil” it’s “an evil”. AN! And “villan” is spelt with an i, dear. Villain.

Yamis: Caru - smart, kind, sensible, caring, takes over once in a while when Sakura is in dire situations. Like if Sakura is hurt.

Bakura: Well, how did you figure that?

Cala - Cala is always on a constant sugar high. She usually takes over when Sakura doesn't want to talk to people. She is smart, and always looks on the bright side. Either way, when the item takes away Sakura's energy to restore it's own magic, Cala and Caru have to stay in spirit form. They do not enter Sakura's soul room unless they knock or have to. Sakura does the same for them.

Lori: Ahem, "Yaaaami! I told you you're not allowed in my room! I hate you! I’m gonna go smoke pot, have sex and get knocked up, just like the spoiled teenager I am!”

PP: Might I just point out, how in the hell can someone have TWO yamis? Impossible!

Living Quatres: Lives with a foster family because her mother used to abuse her, and her father was never around. The house is right next door to Yuugi’s.

PP: ‘Quarters’ not ‘quatres’.

Yuugi: Ok, that's it; I’m NOT living next to that bitch! We’re moving to Mexico.

Lori: Ya know, the funny thing is, Phantom and I wrote a fic, and our OC was in the EXACT same situation. We have yet to post it.

PP: *ominous background chuckle*

Favorite Cards: Buster Blader, Dark Magician, Kaiser Sea Horse, Hyozanryu, Black Luster Ritual (Magic Ritual Card), Black Luster Soilder.

Deck: Mostly dark monsters with a few earth and light monsters. Lots of magic and trap cards.

Yuugi: About the most logical thing I’ve heard yet.

Kaiba: Don’t speak too soon.

Sakura: Thoughts are in bold italics as well as when yamis and their lighter sides use their link.

PP: Grammar… grammar… GRAMMAR!!


Chapter One – A New Day, A New Home

I awoke hearing my alarm clock.

BUZZ! BUZZ!

"I want more sleep," I tried to cover my head with the pillow but it didn't work.

Lori: Really? It didn’t work? That’s too bad.

"SAKURA! GET UP! FIRST DAY OF SCHOOL!" my youbo, Jenina yelled.

PP: If you want to emphasize something… use italics. That’s what they’re for. Except aff.net doesn't let us use italics... or I just can't be bothered typing in the codes for them XD

"Ok!" I yelled back. I pushed myself off the bed and pulled out a pink jaket, white top and blue skirt. The sorry excuse for a school uniform. I pulled my into a tight french braid, put on knee high white socks and black shoes. Finshing off the outfit, I put on light pink eyeshadow. I grabbed a neckless with a small cross bow charm on it. I put it on. Imeadiatly two voices spoke to me.

Malik: Okay, my first language might be Arabic, but some of these English words just don’t seem… right.

PP: Let me, Malik. It’s ‘jacket’ not ‘jaket’; ‘french’ always has a capital, since it’s from an origin, a.k.a France, so it would be ‘French’; ‘eyeshadow’ are two separate words; ‘finshing’ is spelt ‘finishing’; ‘neckless’ is spelt ‘necklace’ – the way she spelt it almost seems like this Sakura person has no neck – and ‘Imeadiatly’ is spelt ‘immediately’.

Sakura? Why do you seem nervous? Cala, the more sensible dark side of mine asked.

Kaiba: Correct me if I’m wrong – which I’m not – but wasn’t “Caru” the “more sensible” yami out of the two?

Yeah! YEAH! YEAH! WHAT'S UP?! my more hyper dark side of me asked.

PP: Again, capitals.

It's the first day of school. I got no friends, and the friends I did have in Osaka are not here. So think about it! BUT I WANT TO BE BACK HOME! LIVING WITH MY FRIENDS! I sighed.

Do not worry, being a little nervous isn't bad. Just relax and have a nice time, well be there with you. Oh and don't forget your school bag, Cala was great to talk to when I felt nervous. The fact that she would be with me at school pleased me more.

Lori: It’s ‘we’ll’, not well. “Well be there with you.” That makes no sense.

I'LL STAY HERE! IT'S BORING AT SCHOOL! Caru shouted. I always wonder if she has a sugar mountain in that soul room of hers.

PP: Don’t know about you, but with a yami like that, this girl would have gone insane by age seven if it were me.

Good, Cals sighed.

I made my way down stairs and sat at the kitchen table. Jenina placed a plate of pancakes in front of me and kissed me on the forehead.

"Morning," she said to me in a cheery voice.

I was used to my drunk of a kaasan yelled, 'GET TO SCHOOL YOU WORTHLESS PEICE OF FILTH!' It was a nice change. The house was filled with flowers. Jenina was a sucsessfull buisness woman who worked for a Seto Kaiba I believe. It striked me odd that she didn't like her boss. She liked most people.

PP: Woah, woah, woah, hold the phone, here! This entire paragraph, to me, makes as much sense as tits on a bull.

Lori: XD Let’s start with the first sentence: “I was used to my drunk of a kaasan yelled…” to correct it, she could have changed ‘yelled’ to ‘yelling’. Much easier.

PP: ‘Successful’, not ‘sucessfull’. Also, ‘business’, not ‘buisness’; and ‘struck’, not ‘striked’ which, in my vocabulary, isn’t even a word. Seriously, does this person not have a spellchecker?

"Jenina, thanks." I said. I didn't want to call her mom.

Jou: Why not? Weird, calling your parents by their first names…

"Oh, you're welcome. By the way, there's a nice boy next door. It would do you well to meet him. His grandfather is rather nice. So is his grandson. I asked him to meet you outside today after breakfast and walk you to the school."

PP: Okay, let’s backpedal a bit here, shall we? The mother, “Jenina” is talking about Yuugi, I presume. “His grandfather is rather nice. So is his grandson.” If she’s still referring to Yuugi, does this mean that Yuugi has a grandson? 0_o confusing…

"YOU DID WHAT?" I asked shocked.

Lori: You asked shocked. Commas people, commas.

Just great! I get an escort to school!

I moaned and finsihed my breakfast. When I left the house a kid stood there, shorter than me, and he had tri-coloured hair. He had violet eyes and wore a golden puzzle around his neck. A girl stood next to him, she had blonde hair with pink and purple highlights, and wore a golden cross around her neck.

Ryou: *sigh* I guess she’s never heard of a beta before. It’s ‘finished’.

Could that be...no. No, it couldn't be.

"Hi," the boy said to me. He looked like he was twelve.

Yuugi: Well, gee, THANKS.

"Hi," I said cheerfully.

"Hello, I'm Yuri, this is Yugi, despite his size, he is 16," the girl said to me. It seemed like she was either his cousin or sister.

PP: Use words, not numbers, in sentences.

"I'm Sakura, I just moved here." I didn't know why, but those two had a strange aroa to them.

Mai: What the hell? “Aroa”? I think she means, ‘aura’.

Yami: So close, yet so far…

"We know that," Yuri spoke up, "Anyway, if we don't hurry well be late!" We rushed off down the street.

Lori: WELL be late? WELL?! Never heard of apostrophe’s, I guess.

It wasn't long until we bumped into two more people. The girl had short brown hair. The boy had blonde hair and was tall. Well everyone was taller than Yugi put it that way.

PP: “The girl had…” “The boy had…” it’s just so…

Lori: Flat.

PP: Blunt.

Lori: BORING!

Yuugi: And it’s not my fault that I’m short!

"Hey guys," the girl said.

"Hey Tea," Yugi smiled and helped up the blonde while Yuri helped up the brown.

PP: “helped up”…? Since when did Anzu and Jou fall over…?

Lori: And “…helped up the brown” XD that sounds really… gross.

Tea. So that's her name. I wonder who the blonde is?

"You ok Yug?" the blonde asked.

"Yug?" I asked, who was Yug?

"Oh, Joey calls me that. It doesn't bug me." Yugi told me.

"Who's dis?" Joey asked Yuri and Yugi.

"Oh, this is Sakura. She just moved in. Her mom wanted us to walk her to school," Yugi was very cheerful.

"I see...well, den it's settled. Dis little lady is going to have to walk with all of us," Joey replied.

"DIS little lady doesn't like to be called DIS LITTLE LADY! Call me Sakura, and if you must call me Kura." I replied. I didn't apreciate being called little lady.

Bakura: Quick, somebody get her some tampons…

PP: *snorts* XD ‘appreciate’. Almost. Just missed out a p this time.

Well, now that you've met some more people, can I go back home? Cala asked me.
Sure.

Thanks, Cala went back home.

Malik: How can a yami “go home” when he or she is inside a soul room communicating via mind link? -_-

"So Kura, how do you like it here?" Joey asked.

"It's okay so far. I've only been here a weekend. Even then, I've been in my room, listening to Good Charlett and setting up my room."

Lori: Charlotte. Not Charlett.

PP: “Even then, I've been in my room, listening to Good Charlett and setting up my room.” Well, it’s obvious she’s in her room, so why’d she have to put it twice? e_e

"Oh, well dan, we gotta show you the city! It rocks!"

PP: Dan? Who’s Dan?

Mai: She meant “then”.

Jou: Well how was I supposed to know that? I talk like I need fucking speech therapy in this shit…

"Wheeler-"

"Ah-" a teen dressed in the male form of the school uniform, with brown hair and colbolt blues eyes walked up behind me and shoved me aside.

PP: Correction, ‘cobalt’, not ‘colbolt’.

"Awe, did I scar the little girl?" the teen asked in a snobby voice.

Lori: You didn’t ‘scar’ her, you scared her.

Kaiba: Not my fault.

"Hey, shut up will ya. Your voice is starting to bug me. Oh my. That's only the first time you talked. Think about how much you annoy other people," I replied back at him staying calm, "And...news flash...I am not a little girl. I'm sixteen."

PP: Oooh, sixteen! Like THAT'S not young -_-

"How long did it take you to come up with that one? Five minutes." he smirked.

Kaiba: What the fuck kind of comeback is that?! This is an insult to my intelligence.

"At least I don't put so much grease in my hair. I know what I can call you, grease head! That so suits you!" I smirked, he was starting to get angry where as I kept my cool.

Kaiba: I don’t put grease in my hair…

PP: Who DOES put grease in their hair?! O.0

Lori: It’s more like wax, hairspray or mousse. Grease just makes your hair look oily…

"Whatever. Wheeler, I mean...mutt, I sugest you move or I might be forced to move you myself." the teen pushed Joey out of the way. Joey was not too happy.

Ryou: ‘Sugest’ has two g’s.

"Why dat Kaiba!" Joey yelled, "I'll show him!"

"Joey calm down," Yugi tried to calm Joey down, but to no sucess.

PP: *sigh* It’s ‘success’.

"Who was that?" I asked.

"That...that was Seto Kaiba," Yuri answered.

"Really, he's mildly interesting," I said with a smirk, "This year might not be so bad."

"AH!" Tea wailed.

Lori: Now THAT was random.

PP: In my dictionary, a ‘wail’ is a loud, long groan. A more appropriate word would be something along the lines of ‘shrieked’, ‘screamed’, or ‘cried’.

"What is it?" I asked.

"WERE GOING TO BE LATE! IT'S 8:20!" she screamed.

PP: Caps. No need.

Lori: WERE going to be late? WERE?! What the FRICK is up with people not using proper punctuation?!

"OH NO! RUN! HURRY!" Yuri yelled pulling Yugi along. Joey grabbed me and Tea and we ran toward the school at high speeds.

PP: …Dorks… XD

Malik: Who really worries about being late for class, anyway?

Kaiba: Them, obviously. *still pissed about the grease-in-hair thing*

Lori: Feh... post your comments people, bearing in mind that we don't give a shit what you flamers think! FOOOWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

PP: What she said...