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Oh my god....*is dying of laughter* ....it's like a kid wrote this.

Marik: It wouldn't surprise me.
Ryou: *shakes head*
Bakura: *laughs* I LOVE MST fics!!!!! Keep up the excellent work!

I called off of work so damn depressed today. Thank you so much for putting a smile on my face today.
*hands Seto and Joey plushies*
*holds naked, chained seto* You can have this.
Seto: O_O

P.S. Sorry about you feeling so sick. *hugs*
Ryou: Drink lots of hot tea...Chai Tea kicks butt!

could ya please stop with the grammatical error reports. Surely the story doesnt need to be stuck with them worse than a pincushion.

May I say that this is the most...AWESOME MARY SUE BASHING FIC EVER!
You are wonderful!
You did such a good job on this. I've missed MST fics on this site. D-chan doesn't write her stuff anymore...and she was a great MST author.
Please keep this going as long as you can.
Ever considered doing other mst's?
*hands bakura, ryou and seto plushies*

*passes out from laughter after reading rest of fic*

o_____________o.

...I fuckin' adore you.

Wow. That was blunt! :3

::~Heart~::

Daaku. o-o;

Aahaha, just as insane as the last one!

Ohh, lemme guess who Bakura got laid with... Hm... ::glances at Ryou's limping form:: >;D

Anyhoo, this Sue is freaking crazy. It reminds me of a time when I was in 8th grade and shared a gym class with a 7th grader who made complete sues, drew horrible pics and wrote fanfics, for Yugi and Seto. One was Ivy and the other was a stupid common Sue name I forgot. One day, she was telling my friend and I how Ivy and Seto were MEANT to be together.

"Oh my god, and Ivy is so cold and dark just like Seto and she has a little sister named Rose and they live alone 'cause Ivy's parents died, like like Seto's, and she's really cold and smart but she's mean and hates Yugi!"

My friend was getting rather annoyed. "Her name is Ivy? Well, Weevil is a bug, and I'm sure Weevil would just adore her."

"Ewwww, Weevil!?" The 7th grader exclaims.

"Yes, he could just EAT HER UP. . . like a bug." Yes, foreshadowing oral sex is always a good plan.

Unless... "What's that mean?"

Well, darlings, I can't wait for the next chapter. Hope your eyes haven't melted yet and perhaps we could get paperbags for the barfing? See ya! ;3

77: Once again, the commentary in this is more worth the read than the original drivel whatever-the-fuck her name is plopped together.
Ryou: You mean you don’t remember the original authoresses pen-name?
77: Er... It’s not worth wasting my last few brain cells on, okay? Her story makes my eyes bleed...
Bakura: Plopped? *licks Marik’s bloody mouth and snickers*
Marik: I’ll give you a plop, bitch-boy! *grabs Bakura and pulls him into the closet to have hot, evil monkey sex*
Malik and Ryou: *grab their cameras* WOOOHOO!
77: *evil grin* Yum... *snicker* Okay, anyway, this MST is fucking hilarious. I don’t give a shit if someone doesn’t like what you’re doing, I think it’s very fitting and quite amusing. If you can actually read through whoever-the-fuck’s shitty ficcage, I have to commend you. Really... people who post such crap should be burned alive at the stake ...after being gruesomely tortured for as long as possible. How do you even get through reading, “The New Skank?”
Yugi: It’s “Girl”
Yami Yugi: *shakes head* No, aibou, I assure you, it’s skank. Let’s go screw.
Yugi: *blushes* Uh... okay...*giggles*
Yami and Yugi: *disappear into the kitchen*
77: Once again...Yum, and thank you for continuing with the Mary-Sue slaughter. *hands out sharp objects and voodoo plushies*

o_o Wow....

XDD I'm so grateful you've done yet another chapter...the first time I saw this I read all 8 chapters in one shot! Of course, that took a couple of hours, between your comments, and her lack of English, I found myself having to minimize the screen and taking a walk around my house, it was just too much at once! XDD

All I know is that I'd love to check out the real story on FF...looking at the comments that have been left here, I'm almost afraid to see what's been left on the actual story...o_O...

Oi, just keep it up, the two of you make my day! XD

I just roam around on AFF.net, glancing at a few summaries here and there, but this story caught my eye. I'm glad I took the 20 minutes to read it. ;3 Good job on the comments; simply loved them. As you can tell by my email/AIM username, I simply hate those damn sues'. Bleh. Makes my jaw hurt and stomach churn when seeing their vile stories.

I just love when these...children try to write romance scenes. The "fiercly blushing" made me ponder if the gal had a fever? STDs? The flirting is too typical. I believe she took ideas from other animes or perhaps they sprouted from her mangy mind. Urgh, I hope there isn't a lemon. ::twitch::

Poor, poor Kaiba. How simply dreadful for the man to know that an OOC clone of him roams around, courting a Marysue! And Jou, for his clone to have that obnixious Bronx accent! And Ryou, for being her first target!

Well, I won't waste your time with my rambles. To conclude, I just wish I could smex all of you up. D:

In fact. . .

::smexes:: AH-HA. >>

Oh please, for the love of all things anime..*mutters* This chapter was as usual; painful, and I see, like you notedm, there was no opening. Is our "author" getting lazy? Or just realizing no one really cares anymore? I don't think I've ever read a fic with so much Kaiba-OOC. -_- *holds up a stun gun* Who wants to go first; it doesn't hurt that bad if you pop a few of these first..*holds up Vicoden* Wait, Lori, PP, would you two like some? Half a Vicoden and a Long Island Ice Tea = Vicoden land! It's a great place, visit it sometime. It may help you keep your sanity....maybe. Well, I guess the mistakes weren't...that...bad... -.- Well good luck, I'll see you next chapter. *binds Lori's wounds again and offers more drinks, snacks, and vicoden*

~ Jade