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for The New Girl - Perfection has Landed!

by Whytney

person Anon
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Guys! Yugi's been hit by a bus!"

...Oh...fucking God...hysterical laughing must--STOP. I swear. That got me falling out of my poorly-constructed chair in mad giggles. I pray to my lord and savior--who happens to be a patched sock puppet--every single day for this to happen.

Ah. Yeah. Best regards to your merry band of friends. I would have dropped dead if I had to deal with just the first chapter. Most of this mindless drabble was just too embarrassing for me to read, and so I decided to mostly skip through to the comments. It was that horrible. However, I'm not afraid to say that I adore you for this small laugh.

I love ranch dressing.
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Funny stuff ^^

Pregunta...did you write the original fic or did you find it? Sorry if you answered this already, but I wasn't sure.
Also, it'd be less confusing if you put your comments in parenthesis or something...there's alot of disconnect as it is right now.
Otherwise, it's hilarious ^^

~Loki
person Erelyn
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg, just...omg. The story alone was, wack. Your comments made my day. I seriously didn't expect a any writer, who would post something like this...no, let me retract that statement...why would someone bother to post that?! And how old is that writer?! The grammar is atrocious, the story is bland, and it seems that the person has no common sense whatsoever. Anyway, I loved that bash. It made me think about how 'stupid people are blissfully unaware of how stupid they really are.' Ever got corrected in grammar by an idiot? "No, you should say more better." ...w/e, this review isn't about me, but about your hilarious reaction to this peculiar form of writing. Keep it up!
person bakurasgirl
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squishes you and hands you Seto plushies* YEAH! I missed this story alot!I'm glad to see it was updated! You rock.....seriously. ^^ *hugs*
person bakurasgirl
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* Yami fell to the ground panting.....Yami was masturbating...but it wasn't written into the scene. I guess maybe the pharaoh needed that to give him some morsel of pleasure after reading this lousy fic. Poor Yami.
Anywhoo....great, funny chappie like usual! You guys rock!
person Cookie
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Funny as hell!
Sorry I can't flame you. Maybe next time.
person Naye025 (I\'ll sign in someday...)
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*twitches horribly* I somehow read the original version of the fic...well at least the first couple chapters... I was mad at all the bad grammar and the horrible spelling... I just had to let it go. I enjoy reading flames of fics and you did a great job with this one!

Ja!
person MarikIshtar77
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hell yeah I'd like to help you devour the fuck out of the last chapter. You know where to find me. I'll bring the whips, ball gags, and honey powder...*shifty grin*
person bakurasgirl
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*dies laughing* oh the trauma continues.......
Hey, I would like to give you a hand! You know where to find me!
person Daaku.
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I actually have nothing I could possibly add. :\ Except. Um. Yeah. this is interesting? (:

Mary-sue things annoy me. Why are gary-sues so rare? At least those seem appealing. :3 -Coughcough.-

I ruined my first statement completely. I did actually have something to say! -Seizure.- But, yeah. This is actually hilarious, and strange. Like a combo package! :D Iwant a damn chicken, that wouldn't peck my eyes out if I tried to dress it in some sort of amusing pink leotard. ;-; Gawd.

You're not some weird mortal God I worship, but I have to hand it to you. You're humorous, and I'd like to see more. o___.

::Hearts!::