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April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I found your insights on the Mary-Sue rather funny. What am I saying, they were down right hysterical. Though not all Americans write or like Mary-Sue characters. And believe it or not, they actually serve a purpose. They show us how NOT to write a character! ^_^
~J. Hellraiser
"I'm not crazy, I just appear that way."
~J. Hellraiser
"I'm not crazy, I just appear that way."
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And now that I have my breath back...
This reminds me of an Avartar: The Last Airbender misting site.
Well done.
This reminds me of an Avartar: The Last Airbender misting site.
Well done.
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February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, but I couldn't even read the entire first chapter...It's just so darn annoying!! >.< And not to mention completely true...
I have better grammar skills than most of those authors and I'm not even English!! *fumes*
I have better grammar skills than most of those authors and I'm not even English!! *fumes*
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Quite frankly, I wasn't able to actually read the entire story. I just skimmed through those parts until I came
to your comments. It was hilarious! Stories like the one you parodied make me kinda sick to read (although,
I do occasionaly try if I can't find a decent one I like) and many of your comments are ones I've said to myself
as I've read some of these...things. (I shudder to call them stories.) Thank you! Thank you so much!
to your comments. It was hilarious! Stories like the one you parodied make me kinda sick to read (although,
I do occasionaly try if I can't find a decent one I like) and many of your comments are ones I've said to myself
as I've read some of these...things. (I shudder to call them stories.) Thank you! Thank you so much!
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cries* it's over!!!!! NOOOOO!!! Well, hopefully you guys will do the sequel. If you need a hand on it, I can see what I can do. ^^
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It shames me to admit this but...I want to save this misbegotten piece of trash. If you folks could email me the original chapters, I want to take a crack at rewriting it so that is not only legible, but makes sense. I so hate to see a good plot die...even if the characters are crap.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*tackles and huggles* i adore the both of you *nods* this needed to be done *huggles again* i wasted all of the time i had for cleaning reading this which shall get my ass kicked but i still love both of you ^_~
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was great hehe I couldnt stop my laughter from pouring out
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
x_X i'm only on chapter two and i can't take it anymore...i do mary-sue esqu fics all the time when i get board...but i always end up killing my characters....^_^ cause thats always fun!...and..a crossbow? dude....did the egyptians even have those? i dunt think so...o.- and how can you have two past egyptian lives?...._. and how can a yami eat suger?...WHAT IS WRONG WITH HER?
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay i just had to comment because i really like how you're bashing the shit out of this person but...i just can't read anymore, of course i love the in between comments and i'll slowly continue but to much of these errors at one time.*begins pulling at eyes*...IT BURNS!!!!!
who in their insane fucking mind writes this?? and why?? i mean even they have to see how pathetic it is...
but i really really like the humor in between and that's what kept me reading this far
who in their insane fucking mind writes this?? and why?? i mean even they have to see how pathetic it is...
but i really really like the humor in between and that's what kept me reading this far