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for Mela en’ Coiamin (Love of my Life)

by Ravenx

person Natz
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm BAACCCCKKKKKK!!!!!! Miss me? I didn't miss me. Me can get so annoying some times. I'll make it short and sweet.....LOVE IT!!! LOVE IT!! LOVE IT!!!. tHAT GOES FOR THE ENGULFED TRILOGY TOO. anyways i'm sick and just took my meds.....so....yeah. keep me informed for more ok? and the letter's coming.....eventually ok. works a bitch.

love ya babes

xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

NATZ
person hatochiisai
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The threesome lemon was just fine.... >.> I'm just not crazy about the incest... That always kinda bugged me. But other than that, I do like the story. I had my doubts at first, but I am enjoying it! Keep it up! ^.^
person Nymphadora_Tonks
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey girl,
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while... -_- my stupid computer has been messing up yet again... but now I have a new one... so I can get on and review more.... YAY!!! All I have to say about chapter 6 is... I really need a cold shower Oo;;;. Oh and can elves have kids too like in the Engulfed stories? I know your not going to go back to the engulfed stories any time soon... but when you do, do you think you could to a side store about the twins have some "fun"? >> and any of the the other kids for the matter. Is Bakura and Ryou going to be the next in line to get some lol? Hope to hear from you soon, and to get a nother great chapter. ^^

Love,
the REAL Tonks ^^
person Alexis
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this new story as much as I loved the Engulfed series. Please keep writing. ^^
person Gaia
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...Now I need a cold shower. That was great but will Mokuba break up with Duke and then find a new lover? Will something bad happen? I have this in mind for some time so here it go: Will Tristan discover about Jou and Seto? Or Tristan will find some one? And will this story have mpreg on it? Please update soon. Ja ne
person Silvershadowfire
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
0.o Okay, that I didn't expect. Jou and Seto, yes. Jou, Seto and Mokie, no. But it was still a good threesome!
person janet
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there......um this chpater i ok i gues......but i sure could use some warning that there will be incest......
other than that i think this fic is good i am just not that comfortable with incest!

update soon!!!
person Rayne
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heh heh... ouch that was hot. Jou and Seto and Mokuba.... yum. heheh... for a first time threesome very nice. Wouldn't mind more from these three. Aren't I bad?? hehe heh...giggles with random evil thoughts...
person Sarah Costa
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I like the threesome but I don't like the idea of SetoxJouxOther or YamixYugixOther. It was good. Please update soon. And will someone get pregnant? Ja
person Juuni
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, not bad. I may not be a big fan of threesomes, but this one is good. However, I do feel that Mokuba deserves a lover of his own, Maybe Mokuba can find someone?? And don't do a threesome with Yami and Yugi. I love this pair and I don't like see them in a threesome. Anyways, please keep up the good work and update soon. Ja ne