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I hope Seto rips Tristan apart. HEHEHEH!! Cool chapter!

Bakura: You're finally mine!!!!

Ryo: Oh yes! I am...so...when are you giving me a ring?

Bakura: A WHAT!!!!!!

Hi there another great chapter!!!
Glad that the writer block is gone!!
Hmmm i am glad that there is no 3some for yami and yugi....for some reason i just cant stand it maybe i am just a hopless romantic hehehehe....

Cant wait for de next chapter and i got a feeling that it will be ryo and bakura turn .....
I sure hope that malik is able to get over the past soon and learn to trust marilk as poor marlik i am sure it must feel terrible for him not being able to be fully accepted by his love!

Serves you right... You didn't even have any warnings... of threesomes or incest. I noticed many will accept yaoi, but not incest. As for threesomes, not many likes it, either. The only reason I didn't object too much to the threesome in the previous chapter was that it was pretty good for a threesome. However, I must confess, I didn't like the fact that it had Mokuba in with Seto and Jou. I don't really like incest too much. Not only that, I am a diehard SetoxJou fan, so I don't really accept Mokuba with them.

Anyways, on with this chapter. Hmmm... I like how it's going, but there wasn't much action going on, except for the teasing of Yami and Yugi, Seto finding out about Tristan, and Marik's moping. It seems a bit short, compared to other chapters... *shrugs* Also, i noticed that you wrote it in present tense. I have to say that it doesn't seem to fit right. Usually, stories are written in past tense. Oh, well...

Kodachi

how on earth did i miss chapter six? hmm... anyways, the mokie thing was a bit odd, but jous cool with it... :shrugs: If it was just seto and mokie i think id have more problems with it...

this chapter... well, i wanna see tristian get fried.... but im just being nasty...

nice chapters. :thumbs up:

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Loved the beautiful fluffy and heart warming moments
between all the elves. Will the next to get together be
Ryou and Bakura or What will Marik have to do to get
with Malik. Anyways great chapter and I wonder who the
villian will be to try and break them apart. Will it be
Tristin because of his love for Joey or Tea.

JK: Okay we'll share and I won't harm him at all *lets orb
disappear and snuggles into Yami and pulls Yugi into her
lap* Are you comfortable.

update soon and as always ... loving it

Jadedkatrina

YE gads... i still love ur story. It's unique in its characters and location. I love the language and i hope that tristen and duke aren't asses... please?

I love it! One of the best stories. What happen next? Please update soon. Ja ne

Great chapter!
I love your stories. I hope you continue writting more stories.
Is Ryou and Bakura lemon next?
Please update as soon as you can.
Bye

great threesome. glad u updated, really great chaps ya got goin. i will try to wait patiently, though i dont know if i will seeing how well you write, its like a mini addiction, and i LOVE IT!!! continue.
ciao