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for Mela en� Coiamin (Love of my Life)

by Ravenx

person Patusca
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!!!
Glad that the writer block is gone!!
Hmmm i am glad that there is no 3some for yami and yugi....for some reason i just cant stand the idea of a 3some with them....
Cant wait for de next chapter ....
Update as soon as you can PLEASE!!!

Hugs
Patusca
person NJDevils
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very good. Planning on the jealousy factor with Tristan perhaps?
person Chibi-Rose
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are the best! You can't get anthing wrong! Another great chapter I really liked...loved it! I may sound stupid by asking this but what is a mpreg? (Did I spell it write?) soory if I sound really stupid by asking this but I don't know what you mean by it. ¬_¬ Anyway I hope you update soon and here *gives a big bouquet of pink and white chibi-roses* Enjoy the roses, I love roses (hence the name) Bye!
person Shinigami24
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*muses* Hm, 3 chapters left, enless you got something up your sleeve...*winces* Ouch! Poor Ryou! He tripped over Yami and Yugi! *pauses* Okay, Marik/Malik lemon pls! Along with Bakura/Ryou!
person Whitney
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol, really good. Kind of glad there woint be MPREG in here. In the Engulfed Trilogy you did go a little over board... lol.

Stil loving it. ^.^ Can't wait
person Sarah Costa
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great!!! GREAT!!! But what happen next? And I glad that this is the only threesome...Please update soon. Ja ne
person Yamima
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What's wrong with threesomes?
person yamiyugiforever
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it you as usaual.hope u update soon.
person Nepha
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter! You rock! what happen next? Please update soon. pity that this story doesn't have mpreg...ja ne
person Serphyona
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, this is one of the, no this IS the best story I have ever written, at first I read it only for the Seto/Jou, but you've written it so well, I'm not skipping the other pairings! I love it, even with Mokuba in the relationship. It's lovely! More please!

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