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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I tried to review this last night and it wouldn't take my review :(
Anyway, great chapter, and a literal cliffhanger! I hope that Malik somehow survives this... And Tris might start getting something through his thick head...
Anyway, great chapter, and a literal cliffhanger! I hope that Malik somehow survives this... And Tris might start getting something through his thick head...
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHMYGOD! Why must you be so evil? Seriously, why would you want to kill Malik? Please you can't kill him, PLEASE! *sobs*
Even though you want to kill Malik it is still a good chapter (besides the killing Malik 'cause that is just upsetting!) and I like the lemon between Ryou and Bakura! ^_^ PLEASE don't kill Malik! But anyway as I always do, here *gives white chibi-roses* but please don't kill Malik even though this is your story and my opinion may not count for much, just...PLEASE don't kill him, that's just horrible, PLEASE!?! *sobs quietly* -_-
Even though you want to kill Malik it is still a good chapter (besides the killing Malik 'cause that is just upsetting!) and I like the lemon between Ryou and Bakura! ^_^ PLEASE don't kill Malik! But anyway as I always do, here *gives white chibi-roses* but please don't kill Malik even though this is your story and my opinion may not count for much, just...PLEASE don't kill him, that's just horrible, PLEASE!?! *sobs quietly* -_-
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*acks and dive for cover* Marik WILL kill Tristan! That is once he gets over his shock! Malik better be alright! Cough up a Marik/Malik lemon! UPDATE ASAP!
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh...My ....Ra....what have you done...
Malik falling over the edge of the cliff...
dang...what a cliffie left there. What will
happen to Tristin? Will Marik evoke revenge
on him, thinking that he's dead? What will
Joey do? And who will save the falling teen.
Anyways update soon...
JK: *holding Yugi and snuggling into Yami* told you
that this would be good, now who want's to play Truth
or Dare...*laughs evilly*
gotta go
ja ne
jadedkatrina
Malik falling over the edge of the cliff...
dang...what a cliffie left there. What will
happen to Tristin? Will Marik evoke revenge
on him, thinking that he's dead? What will
Joey do? And who will save the falling teen.
Anyways update soon...
JK: *holding Yugi and snuggling into Yami* told you
that this would be good, now who want's to play Truth
or Dare...*laughs evilly*
gotta go
ja ne
jadedkatrina
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my...Will Malik be ok? That was a great chapter. Please update soon. Ja ne
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was great...Oh Tristian...Malik will be alright? Please update as soon as you can. Ja ne
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MALIK!?!?! PLEASE BE ALRIGHT!!
What happen to Tristian? Please update. Ja
What happen to Tristian? Please update. Ja
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope Malik is alright. Marik will save him.
What will happen to Tristian? Will Marik kill him?
Great Chapter!!! Please update as soon as you can.
Bye
What will happen to Tristian? Will Marik kill him?
Great Chapter!!! Please update as soon as you can.
Bye
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow ... this is really great for a fics you know.
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww...I love it. You rock and you are writting a new story?!?! YAY!!! Ohhh I can't wait to see what happen next and what this story will be like...Update soon? Ja