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for Mela en’ Coiamin (Love of my Life)

by Ravenx

person Kodachi
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, you made them stink!!! *laughs* I can't wait to see Joey and Yugi's reactions to this. Hopefully it won't end in all of them chasing Ryou around the place.

Will Tristan keep his promise though? He doesn't seem like it, considering that he kept chasing after Joey for ....how long again?

However, is there a real plot around the corner? It doesn't feel like there is one.

Kodachi
person yamiyugiforever
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this chapter. I love the ending. BUT... the question of the day is... IS MARIK FINALLY GONNA GET LAIED!? LOL sorry couldent help my self had to much pixi sticks ^_^x. Hope you update soon.
person Sarah Costa
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow....That was great. What happen next? Please update soon. Ja ne
person Kuk
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter!
They all ok...and some of them stink...lol
what will be the reaction of Yugi and Jou to the stink problem?
What happen on the last chapter?
Please update as soon as you can.
Bye
person Silvershadowfire
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe. Stinking cloud - gotta love it. Great chapter, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
person Serphyona
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love with this story! lol I even had a dream about it Oo...jou was all like "Tristen get away!" and he wouldn't and seto wasn't there but then the blue eyes white dragon came and saved him. ^^ I love your story, this chap kicked ass...hehe they all stink..XD continue please!
person Sushi
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, this is getting better and better with every chapter. It was nice to come back from vacation with so many lovely chapters. I can't wait to see what Malik has in store for Marik. heehee.

Have you any ideas what you may do after this fic?
person jadedkatrina
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter as usual. I can't wait to see what
Malik has in mind for Marik as a thank you. And
what will Yugi say to Joey about what he confessed.
And will Tristin actually keep his mouth shut or will
he blab about the dark elves being with his friends.
And will he continue to pursue Joey now that he knows
that he is taken.

JK: *still snuggling in Yami's lap with Yugi in hers*
you go first Yami-kun...or do what ever you want
to...

Anyways gotta go...

update soon

jadedkatrina
person yamiyugiforever
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved it. man tristian is a prich with a capital P
person Camille
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And Marik winds up killing Tristan. Yikes! I hope Malik survives! My God! Ryo and Bakura! Ryo flexible? They are going to have too much fun! The others will never see them again!