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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT! That first chapter was great so keep up the good work! ^_^ I also like the title of the story, please add more chapters soon so I can read more of your great work (seriously I like the element concept you thought of). ^_^
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So this ficcy have 10 chapters...Question, why is Yugi, Joey, Ryou and Malik going around nearly naked? Does they realize that their outfits gives the yamis and Seto easy access? *shakes head* Leatherm why is it that the darks like to wear leather? Okay, not much to say...Except-UPDATE!!!
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh dude i loved your engulfed trilogy... but come on all this elf talk is confusing me, plz i'd love it if you could just put the translations next to the words or just put them in english plz.
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The english in this story is so proper its hard to read it.
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... the story seems really interesting. I like the whole concept of the story, and your writing is always great, I hope you update again soon. -Sandra
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOO!!!.....>..PLEASE PLEASE LET ME KNOW WHEN IS THE NEXT TIME U PUT UP THE NEXT CHAPTER!!>.ITS SO SO COOL!!!!>......
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wouldn't mind being on the update list, since this story is interesting.
Though I don't like Tristian at all, from what i have read so far.
Though I don't like Tristian at all, from what i have read so far.
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!! THAT WAS GREAT!!! I LOVE IT!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. PWEASE PRETTY!!! JA NE
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. PWEASE PRETTY!!! JA NE
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Begginning! I can't wait for more. You are a excelent writer. Please update this wonderful story soon. Ja ne
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW WOW WOW
SO COOL!!! WHAT A STORY!!! YOU ROCK!!!
Please update as soon as you can. Bye
SO COOL!!! WHAT A STORY!!! YOU ROCK!!!
Please update as soon as you can. Bye