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for Mela en’ Coiamin (Love of my Life)

by Ravenx

person Silvershadowfire
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting concept - but the elvish words are a bit distracting. I like the idea though, and the contrast in their clothing. Update soon!
person queen
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!! Please update! I'll keep reviewing! This story is great!
person Diayma
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Can't wait for me and if you wouldn't mind, could you add me to your update list? My email is Diayma@gmail.com. I would greatly appreciate it.
person yamiyugiforever
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it update it soon please.
person hime hermione
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that's an awesome story, but allt hose (elvish?) words are verry confusing.
it's a lot more easy to read if you don't have to scroll down after every 5 lines.....
i'm also busy with your engulfed trilogy and i luf it, i hope this story will be just as good :D

greetz hermione
person Chibi-Rose
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is Chibi-Rose (aka Anon I changed my name). I have just read your story again and it is brilliant! I hope you update real soon so I can read the next chapter because I really want to know what happens! ^_^ Keep up the good work and good luck with the editing! ^o^ *Smiles and reads 'Mela en' Coiamin (Love of my Life) again*
person youkaiblood
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice.....hope that you update soon!
person HellFireChan
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, again! Awesome fic. Keep it up. I would love to be on the update list.
person Jo-Lo
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would like to sign up for your mailing list. And the story is good and has a new feeling to it.
person mistryl
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great beginning and elves! *whacks head* I knew I recognized the language but I couldn't place it! Now I feel stupid! I can even slightly talk it!

Anyways, great start!