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for Mela en’ Coiamin (Love of my Life)

by Ravenx

person Seth
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ITS SOOOOOOOOOO COOOOOOL!!!....>.
person Juuni
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! That was so cute!!! Yugi got to see Yami...They are my favorite couple. Ryou was in a day dream about Bakura. Poor Joey...Having Tristan always trying to make joey to love him...Will Tristan make something against the cute elves? Please update. PWEASE!!! Ja ne
person Sarah Costa
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SO CUTE!!! AND SWEET!!! THEY ARE IN LOVE!!!
What happen next? You are a excelent writer. Please update soon. ja ne
person Nepha
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWW...So cute. Yugi see Yami again...More PLease
person Silvershadowfire
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ne, fluff! Gotta love it. I also love how Yami is the most agressive of the 'Dark Elves' and that he is the first to venture back to see Yugi. I imagine Malik's tune will change when he finally meets Marik...
person janet
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I dont know wat to say but that......i love you!!!!!! Another great chapter!!!
This fic is absolutly great!!!!

Godsknow how u think of all these plots!!!!
I cant wait for the next chapter maybe by then marlik is able to change malik mind.......

update soon

ja ne
person jadedkatrina
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully done, beautiful. The words alone are very
well said/written giving an etheral flow to the story, making
you feel like you are really there with the young elves.

Can't wait until the next chapter to be updated, and I still want
the twins... or maybe little Yugi from this story...He'll do just fine
as well...

anyways gotta go

update soon

jadedkatrina
person Chibi-Rose
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello! ^_^ That was a great chapter, it was so sweet, that moment between Yami and Yugi! ^_^ Keep updating, I can't wait for the next one! ^0^Keep up the good work!
person Sky
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great story! Can't wait for more! Please add me to your mailing list! My email is skylabx@aol.com
person Sushi
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Of course I was excited about this one, and it was great to come home after a holiday to it. I can't wait to read more.