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for Mela en’ Coiamin (Love of my Life)

by Ravenx

person takky
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I so LOVE this story!! The language sounds like a type of Elvish from the Lord of the Rings universe...maybe Queyna (I'm not sure if that is spelt right). There are sights all over the web on these languages. Anyway, great story! I can't wait for more!!!
person Shadow
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Camille
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THat was too cute. Ryo is daydreaming about Bakura. Yugi got to see Yami again! Poor Malik! I bet Marik will annoy the crap out of him!!
person person
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that's just so sweet. ^_^ I love this turn of events, it's just so cute. And the language you found really suits the story. It sounds elven. This fic is just too cool. I love it so much, you are the best writer.
person Sushi
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, the next chapter needs to come out now. =D This is such an interesting story. I can't wait for Malik to realize there could be someone out there for him. ;D
person Jemu
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OO yes yes please continue. I'm very excited to see what these little elementals are up to... hehehehe.... and their counterparts. Well... please hurry and update. Your story is great and the langauge is just captivating so please hurry and put up the next chapter !! And will Jou and Seto have their own little moment?
person Koishii_No_Tenshi
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwww *melts* Yay! Some Yami/Yuugi action wOOt *glomp tackle hug* XD. And gebus... Why won't Honda just give it up already? XD Can't he take a hint? Ah well. I really loved the long chapter. Keep up the great work!
person Anon
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
D: OMG. I demand more and soon. :D It was absolutely great...MORE M/YM!!!
person Kuk
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow
I love it!
Love at the first sight. And Yami and Yugi scene was so sweet.
Please update soon. And keep up the great work.
Bye
person Gaia
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it. So SWEET!!! And a well write story. You rock!!! Please update as soon as you can. Ja ne