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for Mela en’ Coiamin (Love of my Life)

by Ravenx

person Sarah Costa
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! Now I understand why Malik treated Marik and the others like that. And I glad that Pegasus is dead! And how cute Bakura was when he start to ask questions to Ryou...So what happen next? Please update soon. Ja ne
person Juuni
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! MORE!!! PLEASE!!!! PWEASE!!! THIS IS SO GREAT!!! YOU ROCK! JA
person Kuk
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So CUTE!!!
I love it!! GREAT CHAPTER!!!
Pegasus hurt Malik?!?! I glad that he meet his doom by the hands of Marik. That's why Malik react that way...
What happen next?
Please update soon. PLEASE!!
Bye
person Nepha
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was SO COOL and CUTE!!! GREAT STORY!!! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON VERY SOON. PLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE!!! *puppy eyes*
person Jadejj
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far can't wait for the next chapter and what would happen when Jou and Seto go see the dragon :D
person Gaia
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was great...I'm glad that Malik talk with Marik. What happen next? Please update as soon as you can. Ja ne
person icestar
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice fic. I like the mingling of elfish and english.

the characters are deep, as with you descriptions.

again, very nice fic so far. hope to see more of it in the future.
person Silvershadowfire
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that's what they call kismet. Malik had been avenged by Marik before the two even met! That's cool. Please update!
person Sushi
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story just keeps getting better and better. I'm glad they're starting to get along, but I'm sure that things aren't going to go completely smoothly, and I'm curious as to what will happen next.
person StormyHaven
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My poor Malik!! I'm happy that Marik took care of the bad Pegasus! Waiting anxiously for more!!