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for Mela en’ Coiamin (Love of my Life)

by Ravenx

person Anon
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sooo dame cute!!!!!! please continue!!!!
person Patusca
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, Great, Cute and Interesting Story!!! I LOVE IT!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON. ONE OF THE BEST STORIES EVER!!! YAOI FOREVER!!!
person person
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that's so cute! I loved this chapter. You rock so so so much. I love your fics. Here, have a plushie as a reward. *hands her a really cute smiling Malik plushie*
person janet
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh!!!! i almost wanted to cry together with malik. Poor malik now i know why he hate the dark elves.....no one desreve such cruel fate.
But i am very glad that marilk is able to console him and that malik is now geting to trust him.
I am so happy that things are working out well for de other 2 couples but little sad that in this chapter there is no mention of yugi and yami but hey i still
love this chapter

love ya and will also be patiently waiting for the next chapter

update soon!!!
bye
person LazySnake
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo... your new story.
I've read until chapter 4 actually...you are my most anticipated author for Yugioh fanfic.
I check this section purposely for your stories.
Argh...update! Update!
^___^!!
Sorry, I know you update pretty quickly but still....I want to know what happens next....
/*Mumbles to herself:Shouldn't have started reading...Should have waited until the epilogue...Then I won't torture myself*/
But how could I resist....I mean your stories are just so yummy....Argh...Talking to self again.
Anyway just wanted to let you know that you are a great author.
Write on.
person Chibi-Rose
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yet again I can't find anything to pick fault with! A great chapter! ^_^ Please keep updating and continue with the great work! *gives a whole bouquet of Chibi-roses and a chibi-crystal-rose* ^.^
person Chibi-Rose
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I forgot to say something. Telwan! ^_^
person Shinigami24
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*eyes widens* Do you have a death wish, JadedKatrina?! Cuz everyone knows it's suicide to face a yami much less fight one! Anyway, poor Malik! Peggy...come here and-die! *chases Pegasus waving Wufei's katana, as the latter runs for his life* More Ryou and Bakura! Same goes for Marik/Malik! 4 chapters down, 6 more to go, unless Ravenx has some surprises...Oi, Ravenx! Will you be updating your website with some info on elves, from this ficcy?
person seth
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so cool!!!..hehe...its rather cute too!!.....i love it!!...keep it up!!
person jadedkatrina
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter and now we begin to see
just why it is that Malik is unwilling (at first)
to trust or even befriend Marik. He should
be happy to have had justice served even if
it is unknowingly done. Also the moment with
Ryou and Bakura was sweet and Jou's interest
in meeting a dragon is neat as well. Can't wait
until the next update.

JK: *now stands with a glowing ball of fire prepared
to fire at Yami* Give me little Yugi or else...

jadedkatrina