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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love the lemon and the story is great, but i'm noticing a lot of fanfics out there written in present tense. That's only for essays. It sounds better when its written in past tense
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG! i just love this story!
so so so soooooooooooo KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ur story helped brighten my day after hearing about the retirement of my fav jpop star!
plz plz plz plz plz update asap!
and if ur not too busy would u maybe be able to write a brennnan and athan side story after you finish (god forbid) Mela en' Coiamin?
thanks for being such a creative writer!
love Suga!
so so so soooooooooooo KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ur story helped brighten my day after hearing about the retirement of my fav jpop star!
plz plz plz plz plz update asap!
and if ur not too busy would u maybe be able to write a brennnan and athan side story after you finish (god forbid) Mela en' Coiamin?
thanks for being such a creative writer!
love Suga!
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooo another chapter!! I love Yami & Yugi! I wonder who will get together next???? I am in suspense just waiting. Keep up the good work!
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh. I look forward to your updates all the time and it seems they always go by so fast. I can hardly wait until the next update. =D
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!!!!1111 yami yugi goodness. I love it Update soon please.
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey - loved the lemon, and the intimacy. Just how casual they all are together is nice. Keep going ~ I want to see what happens at Seto's place.
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aw, they are all so cute ^_^ except for duke <_< meh.
ah well, very nice chapter, as usual. this story is really very good. hope to see more soon ^_^
ah well, very nice chapter, as usual. this story is really very good. hope to see more soon ^_^
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
W00t! A lemon! ^________^ Yay! This chapter was sooooooo good. You are the most awesome writer. Keep it up! ^_^
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I love this chapter! And the last! (sorry I work all week, so I'll try to review every chappie, promise!) Lots of YY/Y and Joey met Ohtar!! Soo cool!!
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH...MY...GOD!!! THAT...WAS...GREAT!!! I'M SPEECHLESS. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. JA