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Not bad at all... this was a great threesome ....However I not a big fan of threesome. I love this story but please if you do other threesome don't do with Yami and/or Yugi. They do that with each other and no one else with them. Update soon. Bye

That was a good threesome...but I'm not a fan of them however you write very well and it was good to read it. Just one more thing if you do other threesome DO NOT HAVE YAMI AND YUGI ON IT!!! I really don't like the idea of a threesome with them together or not. And please if you have incest in your story, you should warning the people for it. Keep up the great work. Please update soon. Ohhh...I forgot...I have this in mine mind for some time...I want to know if male pregnancy will appear in this story? I'm a huge fan of male pregnancy especially when Yugi, Ryou and Malik are pregnant... ^_^ ja ne

Nice description, but Seto and Mokuba aren't a good pairing! Like Seto more with Joey and Mokuba with... somebody else. You give hem a new boyfriend and we will be happy. But it is a very nice story though!

Thanks for the warning! But pls go in deeper detail next time! *blinks* O.O I certainly didn't expect a scene like that when I read the warning! More Marik/Malik!

hey its me from along time ago (i reviewed a couple times for the engulfed trilogy) do u rember ?
anyways cool story elves are so cool!!
i'm gald duke and mokie are having trouble hopefully they will brake up?
one thing i didnt like and thought was a little werid was seto and mokuba thire brothers i like jou and seto together but not the three of them but thats just me (dont take it personal or the wrong way and please dont hate me!) anyways awesme story its werid havinmokie grown up but cool anyways update soon?

hey its me from along time ago (i reviewed a couple times for the engulfed trilogy) do u rember ?
anyways cool story elves are so cool!!
i'm gald duke and mokie are having trouble hopefully they will brake up?
one thing i didnt like and thought was a little werid was seto and mokuba thire brothers i like jou and seto together but not the three of them but thats just me (dont take it personal or the wrong way and please dont hate me!) anyways awesme story its werid havin mokie grown up but cool anyways update soon?

WOOT! I ish back. I was lazy with reviewing again. Except for the beginning (where I could NOT for the life of me figure out how they were arranged) I thought it was really good! I love incest, personally... 'cept with Seto and Mokuba, but because Joey was in there too, it was jake. The only thing is it sounded a little like Mokuba was in love with Seto, which Idk if that's true or not but my reaction to that is like... ">.> umm no, he's got a man already?" But OTHER THAN THAT! Superb. I suppose we'll be seeing lemons of the other two couples then. That's cool... well M/M is cool... I'm desensitized to Bakura/Ryou because... EVERYONE DOES IT. Frankly, they bore me now. Oh well, I STILL HEART THE FIC ANYWAY!!! n__n So, rock on with ya bad self!

This was my first SXJXM that I've read and all I can say is...VERY, VERY NICE!!

Mokuba should throw Duke off a cliff!!! YEESH!!! That is the first SXJ with M that I have ever read.

Bakura: Don't think about it! I ain't sharing!!!!

Ryo: You're no fun!

WOW!!!! seto on joey on mokuba that was hot. Im sure If I were a guy I would be so hard u wouldent belive. um...yea that was ackward well update soon.