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for Ray of Sunshine

by LadyLaran

person Kugatsu
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww! soo great! soo great!
*addicted* please update!
person Silvershadowfire
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I enjoyed it...and I'm having to keep Seto from doing to Yami's dad what he did to Honda ;)
person DracOnyx
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An excellent chapter hun. Loved every minute of it. Yugi's good to have caught that.

Drac and her muse
person Kenz
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good but its missing something....
what i dont know and no its not Yugi's eyesight......
well Im looking forward for and update.
person Arainaina
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww... poor Yugi he's blind oh I hope Yami and Yugi find away to help one another
person DracOnyx
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter hun. Hope the muses continue to cooperate. I want to see more.

Drac
person Sarah Costa
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...interesting story...what happen next? Please update soon. ja ne
person Silvershadowfire
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yami! *hugges Yami* I hope he and Yugi get together really soon - or at least something happens to get him out of that mess!

Love the bit with the jam session - it that going to be how Yugi and Yami start connecting? Maybe Yami has a gift for music too...
person Liz
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey nice story interesting you made Yami the bad guy in school but alls well.
i liked it can't wait for next chappie.
UPDATE ASAP
person Silvershadowfire
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice start. I'll be looking forward to the update. I think I can see why Yami's being such a jerk, and it's obvious Bakura and Marik can't help him...we'll have to see how Yugi does.