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for Ray of Sunshine

by LadyLaran

person leighc
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yami-kun! This is just awful! *shoves tissues through the crack on the bottom of shy's door* As heartbreaking as it is.....we want more!!!! *chuckles halfheartedly*

Thanks for writing hun.

Chow Mien for Now Mien
person MARMangaFan
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really, really like this story. It is an interesting AU -- Seto has a father!? And he's part of the gang!? And they get together to do jam sessions!? Now I'm going to have to think of what instrument each person plays... =) Thanks for sharing your great plot bunnies. I can't wait to read more!
person Angel Kawaii
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I remember reading this story but not returning to it... Now I regrett it! Great plot and the chapter was wonderful! I can't wait till you update! Ja ne! ^___^
person aspiker
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story is good. 8-) The plotting and situations are flowing together well. Yugi as a blind musician is a new twist and refreshing twist. 8-) Keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
person Cody Thomas
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok I am demanding another update! this is a great story! I can picture it so vividly! more soon please!
person Silvershadowfire
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*winces* I hope that bastard doesn't take it out on Yami... but I hope he gets put in jail for this mess! Then Yami can go stay with his godfather. *grins* And not get beat on. And get together with Yugi...

*huggles muses* Keep up the good work guys! And thanks for the new chapter, Laran! You're making me feel guilty for not updating my stories...

Silver and her menagerie
person DracOnyx
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, hun. So, the question is, will Yami be okay . . . and will Yugi figure out what's going on for sure? *hear's creepy Twilight Zone Music* okay, that was just too odd . . . anywho . . . MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Drac and the Assembly
person Silvershadowfire
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, that's one way to get them together! And it looks like Yugi's instincts are right on...and Yami might have someone he can turn to for help now. *grins* And I think I would like to do something nasty to Yami's father, involving a dull knife and vinegar... Thank you for the update, and I'm looking forward to what else you and your muses come up with!

Silver and her menagerie
person Rosy
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, hope you'll update soon, i really can't wait!!!! (if there is any grammatical mistakes, please don't mind, english is not my mother tongue!^^)
person Kugatsu
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! Yugi's blind! *snickers at Yami* I love it! continue! *stern glance* read my sequel or be punished*