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by nickylein

person ToralynTeinill
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhmygosh.... Jou in a BEAR costume... That looks so wrong! Yanno, it's funny if you think about Zorro and a overgrown teddy bear dancing at a masquerade ball... Ha, I was slapping my forehead the whole damn time saying that Jou needed to wake up and REALIZE that there was a MASK still PRESENT... I think you made this story perfect though by adding a little bit of Kaiba sweetness and at the end, that's so him. There's just no word for an author like you. Keep on writing, Nicky!
person Ykarzel
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEHEHEE!! it was deticated to me! *maturity level drops drastically* YAY!!! *bounces* Sonja, will you adopt me? *sucks thumb* *giggles* I LOVE this story - tho my fav is STILL why u shouldn't kill bees.... ^_____^ I'm working on beta stuff RIGHT NOW! *kisses and love*
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS FREAKIN' AWESOME!!!! Dude, I totally loved it, especially the love decleration part, YES! that was cute, YOU SHOULD TOTALLY WRTIE ANOTHER ONE!!! WITH JONO AND SETH!!! PLEASE!!! OH GOD PLEASE!!! IF YOU NEED HELP WITH A STORY JUST SAY SO!!! IF YOU WRITE ANOTHER...I'LL GIVE...uuuh I DONT KNOW NAME IT!!
person yamiyugiforever
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it it was so beautyful
person KuraResa
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way this was written. It was a very good fic. ^_^ Keep up the great work.
person smalvina
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved it.
good ending
person .Dark.
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
tehehe! this is great! some nice reading where you're bored and want a nice one shoot! ^.^ ~claps~ well done...tehe Silly Bear...tehe..Zorro...

~.Dark.
person anubiset
schedule March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to cry, I wanted to laugh. It was great. The way their emotions played. I loved it. The lemon was good. Could have been longer, but hey, it was good. That is what counts.
person Darkstar
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
I loved it *gets teary eyed* But when r u going to write a sequel
this story begs to have a sequel
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good! This was really well written!
The ending was a surprise and a treat as well!
Really good job on such a fabulous story! *claps wildly*
CONGRATS ON AN EXCELLENT STORY!