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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, me likey. I'm not quite sold on the final line but the whole premise is fantastic and the ANGST!!1! is grand. Jou is a wimp. Kiss the boy, Jou!
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah, i think this one worked a bit better before i cut it down by about 70 words... maybe one of the rare cases where more really is more. thanks for reviewing!