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for Touch The Stars

by hatochiisai

person ferocity
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmm...ryou's falling for marik...hehehe...such a nice couple... i can't wait to see how bakura takes this.

continue
person Tenshi
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Those chapters were so good, but sad. Loved reading them! Poor Ryou! I hope he's okay and I hope they find out who's trying to kill him.
lovies the fic!
person Tenshi
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope Bakura tortures him good and well!!!
I really liked that scene, the last one where Bakura saw Ryou on the tape, it was really touching.
Look forward to reading the next chapter! Lovies all your works!
person YamiBakura
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hiya. i dunno if you check your reviews at all, but i've read several of your fanfics. this is the first one i've reviewed. it was SOO FUNNY! i loved it! my friend Kit (i don't know what you know her as... Yami Kitsune? Little Uke Io? she's got about fifty names..) anywho, she's the one who introduced me to your fanfics, and i am incredibly grateful to her for doing so. you are one of the best writers i have ever had the pleasure of reading, and I have not found a fic of yours i didn't like. kit said you just updated this one - well, here's a new fan, waiting anxiously for the next installment~

YamiBakura

PS: you inspired me to write Yu Gi Oh, in addition to making me like more than just thief bakura and yami... you did the impossible, and made a yugioh fan out of me. ever heard of weiss kreuz?
person Camille
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You had better get the next part out soon! I love this! The Ishtar brothers act so cute together! I see a truce in the future between everyone and peace.
person nancy
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great fiction so far, but im a little confused about the commanders motives. Since he is from a military background, would he not know that murdering an influencial prisoner would get him killed? I just dont see any reason for him to do it. Apart from that, good story!
person Anon
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wheres the sex?
person Tenshi
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! More more!! Sooooo good!!! Lovies it!!!!!!!
person Camille
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an amusing scene with Marik and Malik running to their sister! HAHAHAH!!! The almight Pharaoh...acts like a child when he sees his sister!!! HEHHEHEHEHEHEH!!!!
person Elle-FaTe2x1
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhh! What's going to happen next?

*blush* Seto/Yami! *giggle*