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very erotic love-scene. ^___________^

^_^ YAY, everything's happy!!!! *huggles* YES. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING. I had such a long day today, this was totally worth my sneak onto the computer. THANK YOU!!!

^_^ Yay, Marik and Ryou are together, YAY! *does a happy little dance* YAY!!

Sigh...why did Marik have to do that? I hope Ryo is okay and realizes that he does love Marik. Keep on updating!!!!

OMG I LOVE YOU.

YOU UPDATED SO QUICKLY! PLEASE CONTINUE TO DO SO! I SHALL DO ANYTHING YOU WISH! JUST PLEASE, CONTINUE UPDATING SO QUICKLY! YOU CAN'T END IT THERE NOW!

Even after I read chapter 12, I was already envisioning that this was going to happen, and I almost cried. I'm also writing a MarikxRyou angst moment right now, and I was like, "NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! D'OH D'OH D'OH!! WHY DID YOU TELL HIIM THAT NOW, YOU IDIOT MARIK?!!" I knew this was going to happen! I knew it! I just didn't know it'd be so soon, which made it even greater!!!!!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN! PLEASE! I'LL DO ANYTHING!! *writes you MarikxRyouxMalikxBakura foursome* ANYTHING!

-AL

Yay, you wrote more! I was so happy to see that you'd posted. You're one of my favorite authors. I can't wait to see what happens next. Will Ryou stay with Marik and Malik or will he go home. And what about Bakura? What will he do about his brother being kidnapped now? Can't wait for more!

Ethereal

I have to say this is a really good story.

I think that bakura should provide some entertainment for the royals that are holding ryou hostage. Bakura should torture the guy who was behind ryou's assationation atempt but he should do it with the video line open so malik and marik can watch. you kow put nails in his body... cut off some fingers and toes slowly skin him alive cut off his penice inch by inch then cut off his testicles and make him eat them then rub salt on every would before letting an animal of some kind ( Preferably some wolves or several mice) begin to eat himalive while he relishes the screams of the prick who almost kill Ryou....

...can you do a torture scene like that please?

if you cant I'll be happy to help you with it. oh yes and please update!

and belive it or not i've slept in a bed kind of like a nest... my aunt in georgia got it from sweeden. It's really comfortable and hard to climb out of. and it has speakers that you can put the radio or the forest sounds or the ocean... although the ocean one makes me have to wake up with the urge to peee constantly....



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sorry the kitty got messed up...

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Awe... Ryou's gotta go home soon o see kura update soon!
BUN-BUN

You better update more now. I love this story now more than ever! I want to see it finished and a sequel!