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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THERE MUST BE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love it!!!!!! it's so cool, up date soon k?
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 19
Interesting development. I'm eager to see how the situation of Ryou being trapped in Marik's mind will get resolved (providing they even live though the situation that they are in, of course).
I'm a little confused on one point however. Shouldn't Yugi be able to escape from the cell they are in by teleporting? Yami already proved that they can teleport between different rooms.
Interesting development. I'm eager to see how the situation of Ryou being trapped in Marik's mind will get resolved (providing they even live though the situation that they are in, of course).
I'm a little confused on one point however. Shouldn't Yugi be able to escape from the cell they are in by teleporting? Yami already proved that they can teleport between different rooms.
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I know I haven’t reviewed in a while and I'm very sorry. I've been extremely busy and I haven’t had a chance to read anything lately. Wonderful chapter, as always. I can't wait to see what happens to Ryou. Is he going to be trapped in Marik's mind forever? Can't wait for more!
Ethereal
Ethereal
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooooooooooo! Evil cliffhanger!! Marik and Ryou nooooooo!!! J-just nooooooo!!
Wonderfully written though it was still an evil cliffy!
Wonderfully written though it was still an evil cliffy!
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Poor Ryou though. I hope there is a way for them to get him back and that the other rulers tear that asshole upstart to pieces! or better yet, jetison him into to space with one tank of air, that way he knows he is going to die and can panic! *grins* keep up the wonderful work.
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This gets weirder and weirder. I guess Marik won't let him out until that guy is dead. Have Bakura kill him already!
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Plese update soon! This story is sooo good! It is one of my favorites! Please let Marik and Ryou be together! PLEASEEEEE!!
Anyways, keep up the good work.
Anyways, keep up the good work.
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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! Ryou don't do it! Sorry. Bakura told me to do that. Marik too. I am their hostess, mind slave, and student so what they say goes in this house. Great story. I feel sorry for Marik and Malik, although what Malik did was very funny. "You told me to read it...you didn't tell me to translate it..." Great work. Update soon.
Yamisgirl13
Yamisgirl13
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ughhhh....I was reading....and reading.....and then, just as things were starting to heat up, the chapter ended! I was like 0_0.......0_< *twitch, twitch* NEED MORE! I can't believe you did that! I was like totally absorbed in it, taking no heed of what music my launch cast thingy was playing, not noticing how DAMN loud my dogs were barking, and it just ended! PLEASE UPDATE SOON, this story is like a drug to me! >_0 *twitch*
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Evil Evil cliffhanger! I was at the edge of my seat and then BAM its over and its cliffhanger time! *cries*
Hehe anyway........Love the new chapters! Though I must admit my favorite part is been when Marik and Ryou confessed their feelings to each other!
Hehe anyway........Love the new chapters! Though I must admit my favorite part is been when Marik and Ryou confessed their feelings to each other!