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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well given those options....
Yugi probably DID make the correct choice by staying in the cell instead of teleporting.
Thanks for clearing that up for me. :)
I was mainly confused due to thinking that maybe Yugi was a little like Malik, and didn't get much in the way of teleportational power, but then he went and actually teleported himself and the others to the other ship.
This led to much confuzzlement on my part!
And I have to admit, I did originally miss the bit where Atemu wondered if the other ship was CLOSE enough to make the jump to.
Yugi probably DID make the correct choice by staying in the cell instead of teleporting.
Thanks for clearing that up for me. :)
I was mainly confused due to thinking that maybe Yugi was a little like Malik, and didn't get much in the way of teleportational power, but then he went and actually teleported himself and the others to the other ship.
This led to much confuzzlement on my part!
And I have to admit, I did originally miss the bit where Atemu wondered if the other ship was CLOSE enough to make the jump to.
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww! That was one cute ending to one amazing story. :D Very well crafted indeed. I think there should have been more spacecraft fights, but hey that's just me. Also...the use of actual cultures in space with their own planets. Intriguing, though I'm not entirely sure if I liked it or not. Oh well, as long as you thought it fit. :)
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Happy ending happy ending! *bounces in joy and glomps the author*
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So if no one reviewed, you would have rewritten an angsty end to the story? Good thing folks are reviewing then!
I'm still confused about how come Yugi didn't just teleport them all out of the cell though.
I'm still confused about how come Yugi didn't just teleport them all out of the cell though.
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! please dont kill marik!! *offers a plate of cookies*
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... you kill Marik and I sic my Ryou muse on you.
He's *dangerous* with a spork.
^_^ Otherwhise I'm really enjoying this story. Cuuuute!
He's *dangerous* with a spork.
^_^ Otherwhise I'm really enjoying this story. Cuuuute!
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please, Please, PLEASE update soon.
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You can't!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you can't kill marik after that! anyways love the sotry!
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooooooooooooooo! Marik can't die! He just can't! Cause Ryou's gonna save his right? . . . right?
Ooooooooooooooooh great chapter! I can't wait to read the next one!!
You're such an amazing writer!
Ooooooooooooooooh great chapter! I can't wait to read the next one!!
You're such an amazing writer!
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November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noooo! Don't kill Marik! T_T this is like, one of the few Marik/Ryou fics and the BEST! so much angst and tragedy! you MUST continue!-Blood