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person Nightmare
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit that was good. Ha Marik broke Ryou's bed, he doesn't seem to mind sharing with 'Kura (if they even get that far, which they probably won't, I'm tipping Ryou fucks 'Kura senceless on the table) What's up with our little 'light' half? So yeah good and update soon
person Nomalaz
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are the YGO Yaoi Supreme Deity. Aw man, I hate to see what's gonna happen when Yugi talks to Yami. At least Yugi can go to Bakura. As long as he doesn't mind Ryou joining in. (hint, hint)

I do hope that a B/R lemon starts off the next chappie!
person Arias5
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay! You're not dead...Of course the lemon makes up for the long time for updating!
*huggles* I can't wait for more ^_^ Especially the BakuraxRyou lovin' <3
*~peace~*
person Terry
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love chap 21. It should be subtitled "Marik's uke Day", but I'm just as excited to read about an uke Bakura again :D Keep writing, it's golden!
person bakurasgirl
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww....such a sweet...hot...sexy...voluptuous....intense....erotic....and wonderful lemon!!!
Marik and Malik are so cute together....*squishes egyptian bishies*
*hands Ryou money for a new bed*
Seto: after you buy the bed, ryou, do you want to try it out?
Ryou: *blushes*
Seto: *waves chocolate sauce*
Ryou: *jumps in seto's arms* I'M ALL YOURS!!!
person BloodyTiger911
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, this fic is great. A true masterpiece to be praised like your other works. The way you mix songs with it, that's beautiful, awesome songs too. How you have the characters act fits their personalities, and your great at describing things, very nice and vivid words. I have a high respect for you as an author, you are one of my favorites. To me, your fanfics, such as this one, are like famous paintings by Vincent Van Goh and Picasso. You are older than me, but inspire me greatly, you are one very cool adult [I think it was your profile that said you were 27, or am I getting authors confused?].
Even got me into a couple of new songs and groups, right this second I'm listening to 'Simple Man'. I don't mean to be a suck-up, just tellin' you what I really think. I can't wait t'ill the next chapter, RyouXBakura lemon! Please update soon, and thank you for creating such cool fics, I'll always be reading them from the sidelines.....
person TMD
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehe! Awesome chapter. Loved the lemon, lookin' forward to the next. Great job!
person Kugatsu
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*MEGA GONK*

that's all!? No Bakura Ryou lemon!? I depend on you people who do normal pairings to gimme the hikari yami smut!

T__T waaaaaaaa


I still loved this though! I get so excited when I see you've updated! I love yew! *GLOMPS*
person dreamcorset
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Malik as seme! Yeahhh! That is so rare...
person zehlyah
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE THE SHIT, BABY!! WOOFREAKINHOO!!!!
"Shake it more than once and you’re playing with it." Oh gods I about shot a noseload of soda all over my screen!!
And Ryou shat himself?!? You do know that I have claimed rights to that word, don'tcha? LOL!!
An excellent chapter!! Get cracking on the next one!! Ryou/Bakura yumminess!!!! WOOT!

zehlyah (the duel uke)

PS: We don't do enemas here