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person Emily
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! Lucky little Pharaoh, huh?? Bakura sure is quite a sex god lol!

Great chapter, I can't wait for the next one :D
person zehlyah
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh you damn tease! LOL
person noone
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this ficcy!!!! I just found it and it took me quite some while to finish it, but it was worth it! Update soon!
person Ryu-Chan
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What!? Right at the good part! KEEP GOING!!! KEEP GOING!!!
person Tanya
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was hot. Bakura/Yami almost made me... well, we won't go there yet. I think Marik should get in on the Ryou/Malik action - cuz why have one Ishtar when you can have two? Hee! Fuck, every chapter just gets hotter and hotter... though nothing will ever beat that "fork" scene. "Fuck off, use your fingers!" You've got me giggling (in public!) every time that crosses my mind!

Oooh, one more thing! Spearmint! Heh heh. Couldn't let the Pharaoh contaminate our Yami B!
person Midnight Hope & Iva-san
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Midnight" *eye twich* damn....that was hot!

Iva: yes I know *grins* super hot I like.... really like *smirks* sex toys... I remember my younger sister was going through my mom's closet and pulled out a dildo she didn't know what is was she was shaking it around I was sitting down watching t.v. with my brothers and other sister my eyes almost fell out my head when she asked me "Ivana whats's this?" I started to laugh so hard! -^_^-

update soon
person ArrogantMessiah
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bakura and Marik are somewhere between Axel Rose and Sid Vicious, with a hint of Freddie Mercury sensuality. I feel like when I read this I'm stuck in the era of hair bands and no consequences, your stories embody a freedom of inhibitions and a wildness I have never found before with any writer.
person zehlyah
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you...you...you tease!! you promised...*gives you tearful chibi eyes*

but DAYUM!! Where the fuck to I find one of your Bakuras? YUM

You kick ass. Don't make me wait 2 weeks for the next update!! heh, said the one who hasn't updated in like 3 weeks. I LOVE this story!! You are the shit, baby.
person bakurasgirl
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Marik: *passes out from hotness*
Bakura: I think I need to take down some notes.
Malik: Would they be sexy notes?
Bakura: .......
Ryou: YEAH, I GET A LEMON WITH MALIK NEXT CHAPPIE!
person Terry
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, sometimes I think these guys can't go an day without sex. Great Bakura/Yami lemon, he finally bent over for someone other than Marik. Keep writing.