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person Maliku
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bloody hell. This story spilts my sides, completely. I could actually /never/ imagine Yuugi with Bakura, but who am I to complain?

I love the way you seem to take on Mariku's attitude. It's the way I always imagined. I also would love to compliment your thurough imagination. Simply amazing how you come up with these mindboggling stories!

o.O Indeed. Malik and Ryou would screw like little bunnies, if they ever had the chance, even if it is difficult to imagine Ryou simply jumping into sex. Always fun for a change of mind.

Enjoyable and amazing is all I want to say. Keep up the pace, babe.

~Maliku~



person Arias5
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAi! I can't believe this story is sooo good.
Thank god it's long cause this story saved me from boredom...
ohh gurl! You made Marik & Malik sooo hawt in this chappie
...nekkie boys, showers, radio shows and baku...
I think this story is more then great!
hehe...Can't wait for the lemon ^.^
(~peace~)
person Arias5
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>_> Dude, I must read this chapter again...
it was ... beautiful
Well, the duel part was interesting...i'm not a good duelist but i enjoyed reading this part!
wellz, can't wait for the next chappie...and did i see that malik was gonna get hit in the head with frozen...ham!?
I'll protect you Malik!!! *jumps in the way and gets hit by ham*
x_x
*~peace*~
person TrunkZy
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O!!! But you never lost a duel before! not that I know of! OMG!!! The world has gone MAD!!! MAD I TELL YA!!!
You know I always thought there was something fishy going on with those "innocent" hikaries! *glares at Ryou* "Stop the nice guy act! It's SICKENS me!!!"
Wonderful chappie and dinner is ready to cya later!
TrunkZy the Mighty
person aspiker
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like the lights are becoming more and more like hellraisers. The references to metal music is a good touch too. The writing on Yami's stomach is pretty good --> even better if he still has it on in the am (and does not even realize it...)
person Nomalaz
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Several things:
1 - Alrighty! Sequel!
2 - I want that car
3 - I want that jacket
4 - Yay Bakura for sending the FCC and top spot stealers to the Shadow Realm!
5 - Marik wearing a Santa hat (LOL)
6 - Is it possible for you to do a live phone sex scene?
7 - Will you have Bakura/Ryou going at it on the air?
8 - Update when you can!
person Terri
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! I am so thrilled to see this up! I had planned on going to bed but hey..who needs sleep?!! Well I just wanted to say how great it is and how happy I am now!! Great job and please update soon!!
person Ken-z/Rei/Pyro_neko_07
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Care long Time no talk
I'm sure you ahve been busy and I understand.
Anyways success agin for you hellraisers story That I am
so in love with......
person Horizont
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Christmas is over but I'm nervertheless happy to see your sequel! ^_^x

Bakura is as pissed of as he used to be... a bit more even. ^^;; And... there's some more lemon goodness to come, right? *greedy glance* RIGHT? ^^;;

Okay, can't wait for you to update!

Ciao-ciao!
~Horizont
person aspiker
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alright! A sequel! It's starting out pretty good. 8-) I loved the part where Bakura banished the winners in his time slot and the FCC. 8-)