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person Ralphiere
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How can you leave it there??? Satan-woman!!

I love the dick in the bottle, very nice. And I really loved sticking Bakura in the trunk, that made me happy! MORE! MORE! Keep up the wonderful work, woman!
person Nomalaz
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Marik in red leather! And he's stripping! ::pounce:: I love you! How did you know it's my birthday? Thank you!
person DracOnyx
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH! okay, I just can't wait to see what happens! HOT!

DracOnyx
person Arias5
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omgosh! That has to be the most hilarious chappie so far!! pOOr Honda got the traditional way of getting his "wang" in trouble and gee, i wonder who that raven haired guy was....coughdukecough...hehe, well update as soon as ya can cause i can't wait to see what Marik will do now..!
*~peace~*
person algodon
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
elf-boy and pencil-head... that was FUNNYYYYY...MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.
Nice to read a sequel of "Hellraisers". I loved that story and I'm luving this one too.

Good job and good luck.
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh damn!! That is one show I would looooove to see!!! Great chapter dear! Loved it! Now I can't wait to see what happens next!!! And I am still so waiting for Kura to confront Malik..he really needs his butt kicked!
person zehlyah
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa...Ryou, Malik, and MARIK? Holy f'n yummy! You kick ass, baby!
person ew younerd
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my oh my!!!!! (pant pant)

Poor Baku-sama!! He needs in on some of that action! Yuugi and Yami can just go off an screw since they're practically married....but you need to give Bakura some hikari action!! I know how Malika and Bakura can resolve their issues.....A threesome with Ryou!! Or they can do each other!!! You know....anything hot in YGO+sex=a happy me so whatever.

Keep writing, love.
-ewyounerd
person Nomalaz
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank the gods of Egypt! Bakura's (somewhat) okay. My sympathy to his car. I had a feeling that Malik wouldn't betray Ryou like that (or did he?). Threesome! Whoo-hoo! Bet our fav Tomb Robber isn't happy he's not getting it on with Ryou.

Later! Love ya! Going to read Vice now!
person aspiker
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chappie! The lemons and Bakura's bad mood were well done...