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person Velvetina
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOO. Not the end *glares* well at least I hope that its not the end because man you are an awsome writer. Gah I have to admit I'm a big big fan of Yugi ending up with Bakura properly at some point...but only in your fic, how do you do that man?! Geez its just so brilliant. Also this chapter was so damn hot *drools* the Malik/Ryou with Marik added in...almost too much for a gal to handle...although I'm willing to try hehe. And the party was frickin awsome, i wanna have a party like that...infact you've just inspired me to go throw a party and revlieve the bordem of life. cheers guys. LOVE IT! XXX
person darkrosedamael
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was so great. was a great way to finish off school.
person Midnight Hope & Iva-san
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Midnight: OH MY FUCKIN' GOD!!!! That was the shit right there!!! I loved it!

IVa: I agree.... glad ur back loved the chapter it was tooo damn good for words,

Midnight: -^_^-This chapter gave me an idea, if this boy at my school wants to grind nowit's time for me to grind back!!!

Iva: Your such a lame....Update when you can

Midnight: ^__^ Ja ne, -_____- now I have to finish my story now....
person Switch
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Baby, you are my own personal goddess of smut. I love you! BTW the duct tape... that was HOTT! I'm a tape Guru and trust me when I say Duct tape is the HOTTEST kind of tape there is! *lurve*

you know, I'm not too sure what it was that drew me into the first Hellraisers. maybe it was jsut my preference for Yami Bakura but once I hit that first bakura/Yugi sex scene I KNEW that it was perfect. So thanks for the Ride(s) love*wink*
person Nomalaz
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HELP ME! MY PARENTS DRAGGED ME TO CHURCH! TWICE WITHIN SEVEN DAYS!!! GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

Fortunately, thinking of this fic helped me maintain my sanity during that hour...
person Jem
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMR *drools* The amount of hot sexiness in this was.. GUH *speechles* Also considering i read TEH WHOLE THING in ONE day.. its like ive been bombarded with the shmex. So. much. sex.
Oh and the plot is great too *lmfao* I loved the police files just being.. deleted. So simple.
Damn this is fic is so great.
I wish my english was better so i could describe the extent of my undying love to this fic but eh.. the sex has just.. melted what was left of my hentai brain XD

UPDATE SOOOOON. I want that RyouxMalik sex Radamnit!
person Nomalaz
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It sucks not having a car. My Oldsmobile died in January '04 and I didn't get another one until October. Had to depend on my family (mainly mom) for transportation.

I await your update and I grovel before your writing skills. Love ya!
person Midnight Hope & Iva-san
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Midnight: Hello again....I just read chapter 10.... and I totally bust out laughing when I read when you said you did half of this in church.... You do the same thing I do. I print out some of your chapters of your story and reads them there my mom says I shouldn't ready yaoi and blah, blah, blah, But I don't fucking care you got me hooked on yoai it shall taint my mind FOREVER!!!! I even got my sisters (who is 12& 14) hooked on this also. Thanx to you I look at YuGiOh totally diffrent now whenever I see Yami or Yugi, I yell out "Fuck him Yami fuck Yugi now!" -^-^- In my native tounge so no one else would know what I'm yelling....

^_~ can't wait to read the nexy chapter.... *sighs* I gotta go I gotta to update my story and get ready for school.... >-<
person TopHats
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hope to read the chapter soon ^^ love your fic
person Midnight Hope & Iva-san
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Midnight: What?! >.< noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo


Iva: calm down Middi geez..

Midnight: Don't call me that!

Iva: Midid middi middi middi middi

Midnight: *eye twicth* ^_^ I dunno if I reviewed for the last chapter but so.... LOL now yami sees why Yugi likes Bakura he's a fucking sex god!!!

Iva: Oh yes he is *licks lips* I would worship him and his body anyday.... as long he would do something in return....

Midnight: euh, Iva...please excuse her....she didn't have none in three weeks since her boyfriend is out of town...*snickers*

Iva: Midnight!!

Midnight: That's what you get for calling me Middi...

Iva: Update as soon as you can!

Midnight: Yeah! ^_^