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person Nomalaz
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Marik handcuffed. Very nice.
Yami and Malik stripping. Oh yeah!
Bakura being nice to Yugi in his time of distress. Odd, but rather touching.
Ryou... will rape... Bakura? Someone call the press!
person aspiker
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I swear, that station is my favorite one. 8-) Good thing it streams on the net... ;-)

Looking forward to the next chapter...
person Nightmare
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa Ryou's getting all freaky nasty and I'm sure 'Kura loves it, you go to church? Why (if you don't mind me saying so) its all pompous shit wast of a Sunday
person Horizont
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty nice... Marik handcuffed, how cute! XD

Ryou *raping* Bakura? Why? And most important: HOW? He's a hikari, he's weaker than his other half, that's one of the main laws of YGO-Fics! oOx
Well I'm certainly looking forward to *that*

Baba!
~Horizont
person Arias5
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
W00T! This Chappie had my current favorite song in it *starts to sing da Candy Shop* >_> ehh, I can't sing for shit...

Omgosh...in the next chappie Bakura's gonna be...raped? By Ryou!? I gotta read that! ^___^

Heh...God accepts everything...thank Gods, that you didn't get struck by lightning or else you would've never been able to update and I would've been sad...-_-

*~peace~*
person Eye of Ra
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* hehehe.. my Ra i love you.. you know that right? that was SOO awesome! *snickers* the funeral sounds like its gonna be fun...esp. for a modern funeral. haha.. itd be hilarious if it was all egyptian style with beer and lots of celebration..though if you DID do that, im sure most everyone would be celebrating for a different reason.. *snickers* but yes! can't wait for your next update!! *massive hugs*
person DracOnyx
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ryou's . . . going to rape . . . Bakura?!!!!!! Now this one I have to see! Good chapter btw, and very sweet of Bakura to say that to Yugi (for Bakura at any rate).

DracOnyx
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!..And damn!..I mean I knew you had something planned for the funeral but it sounds like it will be a riot!!!..XD
person Ralphiere
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that was good! I love the scene with them driving by the wedding/church, now that's funny!!

I'm off to read more...YAY!
person Pips
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Come on, write some more! Or else I might explode! And you don't want to be washing bits of burst hobbit off the walls, not after last time. Ick.

*~Pips~*