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Great chapter!!! HOT lemon!!! WOOT!!

And you know..the more and more I read..the less I like Yami! XD

Wow...for someone who claims to love Yugi Yami's being a true prick! Great chapter though! Glad to see that Bakura and Malik made up...even if it was in a smelly old van! Can't wait for the next chapter!

So Marik's little love toy has decided to play s.o.b. on Yugi. Perhaps it's time for Bakura to step in..... hehehe

Okay, I want to seriously hurt Yami after that one. Can that little suggestion be changed to Bakura beating the crap out of the pricky pharaoh? ::cuts Bakura loose::

Bakura: With a lead pipe.

::hands thief lead pipe:: Anywho, that lemon was awesome!

Bakura: It was me, of course it was!

Malik: I was so horney.

See you Monday, hopefully!

Gah! My net connection went out when I tried to review it before..but I can now!!

GREAT chapter!! GO MALIK!! WOOT!

and Kura really, REALLY needs to kick Yami's ass!! Allowing them to stay in his home, taking care of the funeral for Yugi, feeding them and Yami wants to pull shit like that..flaunting something like that in Kura's face..he needs a royal ass kicking!

hey great chapter! Got to love those old ancient traditions eh? 'Kura can cook now? you did great on his cooking clothes Mariks outfit. Aw poor 'Kura hes feeling emotions, he should just fuck Ryou till he feels better.

Hope you enjoyed the show (lucky)

See ya

Nice way to celebrate the demise of the old fart. Yeesh, demi-gods are lucky, aren't they? Yugi would be dead if Yami was a full-god.

Fucked to death. What a way to go.

Yes, Malik is a selfish bratty slut and is now going to give Bakura head yet again. His sexyness can promote forgiveness. It's the only thing that kept him alive this long, right?

And you are going to use my idea? I love you!

Bakura: I'll kill you, Noma!

Yami (puts collar and leash on Bakura and drags him away): Let me show you how it's really done!

Bakura: Let me go, you asshat!

Yami: Come, my pet!

I'm certain he will. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh my god that was so bloody hot, I'm not normally much of a Marik fan, a bit too psychotic for my taste but in that outfit he wore to the funeral I swear i drooled, the red silk combined with the leather and then the handcuffs...I mean HOT so wow. As for Bakura he wasn't hald bad himself, dressed pretty sedatly for him lol that in itself was a hot thought. Talking bout 'Kura I actually feel sorry for him, he has got some self denial issues when it comes to Yugi, not that I can blame him I guess. But wow update soon!

‘Awww..how sweet, the King of Thieves has feelings.’

He does have HORNY feelings XD...just wanted to imput that.
So you've updated...good. Btw, is this story coming to it's climax!? (haha! Get it?)
Mhmm...bring on the yaoi! ^_~
*~peace*~

After reading the last chapter, I would love it if Bakura kicked Yami's ass. The selfish prick! I can't wait to read your next chapter