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person TMD
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. You do a great job at wrtiting these. I enjoyed it alot. Lookin forward to the next update.
person Nite Nite *not logged in*
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Walks over and bitch slaps Yami* Bitch.

Yami: *blinks* WHAT THE HELL NITE!?

NN: *Glares* Bitch *pushes him down on his back* How dare you do that to Yugi! *growls and pulls out her beloved fork Spike* You want some of this!? Cause you keep it up lil Yam Yam is no longer gonna have feelin within him.

Bakura: *cracks up* SHIT! YOU NAMED HIS DICK LIL YAM YAM!

NN: *grins*

Yami: *groans* Shut it Baka!

NN: *stabs him with Spike* I didn't say speak!

Marik: Acutally you should get him on his hands and knees, that suits him much better.

Yami: *glares*

NN: This story is quite enjoyable to read, can't wait for the next chapter. Also will there be Seto/Joey lemons or anything in here?

Bakura: *Growls*

Ryou: Now, now easy boy.

Malik: Yes, maybe we should tame him Ryou?

Marik: I'm gettin my camera!

NN: *chuckles and looks down at Yami* I hate you...though the lemons with you and Yugi are sexy as hell...I like it better when Bakura has his dick shoved up Yugi.

Yami: HEY!

Yugi: *Grins*

Bakura: *smirks*

NN: *laughs* The old man died after seein Yugi...muahahhahha! Yes, this story has all of me fav. pairings together and fuckin around with each other! The songs choosen are perfect and I love how this story is written, your a kick as writer! Update again when you can and...wow...Bakura...HEY...your gonna break him in two I"m sure his leg is not suppose to bend that way!
person Olivia
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter.
person TrunkZy
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am back from the dead! wOOt Great chapter! Oh we just love all those LOVELY surprises! Wonder why Maliks sis is there... Hmmm plotting are we! Loved the lemon, Malik needs to get fucked more... and Bakura NEEDS to get laid by Marik! :D
Ja Ne TrunkZy the Mighty
person Ashla
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Yami you jerk! *slaps him* Little Yug said no, and then after you practically force him into it you give out to him? *shakes head* Someone should get you in that position, no?

Other than Yami being a pig *sticks out tongue* everyone else was grand ^^ nice little chappie! Don't think Marik's gonna be too thrilled to find his light and partner in crime having 'christened' his van, heehee. Can't wait till more!

I like Yami, but I hope Bakura gives him a punch ^^ Heehee.

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Slán slán!
~Ashla~
person Horizont
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gods, Yami is such an asshole, really, guess Marik needs to... discipline him a bit... or maybe Bakura will... I wouldn't mind, but that was so... >_Seto will be in the next part! *happy* ^_^x I love that guy! Don't even mind who you pair him up with...

Well done! ^_^x
But punish Yami some for what he did to poor little Yugi...! Honestly, I usually don't like the tiny duelist, but that was so mean. -.-x *kicks Yami*

~Horizont
person Arias5
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe...Sweet chappie...Baku/Malik make a good lemon ^_< I liked the lyrics of the song too.
Poor Yugi, Being left there all alone and Ryou was passed out through the whole thing, well, HE missed out.
So, I see that Moneybags will be in the next chappie ... YAY! I can't wait! Update! Oh...and take your time. I know it'll be worth it!
~*peace*~
person Switch
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn! noramlly id review this on LJ but i just got home after surgery and dont have alot of time before i have to go take some more vicodin. so all i have to say is GREAT JOB! i cant wait for next chapter i want to see whats up with kaiba and the new conflicts that are bound to play out. so basically good work and keep it commin

Later
person DracOnyx
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Someone needs to completely strangle Yami! Oh my goddess, how could he be so . . . so . . . *grumbles as Bakura takes the keyboard cause her english just flew out the window*

Bakura - Well, at least I got some *grins* Thanks for that, it would have sucked if I hadn't. Am I allowed to kill Yami and claim Yugi now?

Drac and Bakura
person Terry
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, Yami's turning into quite an ass (A fine ass, but an ass nonetheless). I really hope Bakura kicks his sooner or later. anyway, hot lemon with malik and bakura. can't wait to read this antipicated new year's eve party chapter. and once again, great fic!