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person Nomalaz
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
--As Malik’s brain woke up, his thought processes began to click. The last thing he remembered was him and Bakura going at it in Marik’s van.--

I can kind of relate to Malik, except for the "going at it" part (damn it). Last year went to big Mardi Gras party, lotsa booze, don't remember much, and went to work the next day with a hangover.

Oh! Uke Bakura! And seme Malik! Who wouldn't ride the thief?

Yami: Me, for starters.

Piss off, I don't like you anymore. You used and insulted Yugi. I hope Ryou orders the most expensive shower curtain rod, shithead.

Bakura: And shove it up your royal ass.

WTF?! A warrent for Malik's arrest?! What the hell did he (or Marik) do?! Thank the gods Bakura gave Ryou the Millennium Ring. So Ishizu has arrived to warn her baby brother about something. Oh, the suspense!

Hmm, and what exactly did Marik and Bakura put in with the glitter. Why do I have the feeling that the glitter will sparkle in more ways than one?
person Emily
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Another great chapter XD I <3 this story so much!!
person DracOnyx
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, as always. So, I wonder why Malik is on the wanted list and just what the two yamis have done this time. Should be interesting. More soon please.

Drac
person Nite Nite *not logged in*
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CHOOCCOLLLATTEE! *munches happily* MIINNNENEE! It goes...so nicley wit my oreos!

Marik: WHICH she is NOT sharing...*rubs neck that was stabbed with a fork*

NN: *Glares* I told you to back off bitch! MINE! ><

Joey: Yea...I learned the hard way to...you don't mess with Nite and her chocolate and her oreos.

NN: Damn right! WOOT WOOT! GO MALIK RIDE LIL THIEF!

Bakura: *groans* I still cant believe you named my dick that!

Marik: So, at least yours isn't lil rod!

Mailk/Ryou: *bust out laughin*

Seto: Don't feel bad, she named my lil blue eyes.

Yami: And mine lil Yam Yam! WTF! Why couldn't it have been lil ruler or something!?

NN: *Glares* I DIDNT SAY SPEAK BITCH!

Ryou/Yugi: *bust out laughin*

Yami: *mumbles*

NN: ^_^ lol omg "‘Beware my Flaming Rod of Vengeance" I love that...Marik...I WANT THE SHIRT! *tackels Marik and pulls off his shirt* ohh...sexy...*runs hands over his chest*

Marik: *purrs* Maybe you can show me what else your hands can do later.

NN: *chuckles* Yes maybe later hun.

Marik: *Grins*

NN: *laughs* I also loved this..."Marik grinned as he stepped in front of Bakura. “Hello to you too, Kaiba. Long time no see. Tell, me did they get back together yet?”
Seto took a sip of his wine and cocked his head. “Who?” He asked.
“Your butt cheeks.” Oh man that had me laughin I had tears in my eyes, never heard something like that before. Heheh Ryou sent the pig to the shadows...good boy *sniffles* He's gettin more like Baku everyday.

Bakura: *fakes a sob* I know, it makes me so proud.

Ryou: *giggles*

NN: *tackles Ryou* You have the cutest little voice! I wonder what other ptiches I can make you hit?

Ryou: *blushes and gasps* OH MY...NITE! ><

NN: Well...I think I can get you to go a little higher.

Ryou: *blushes and turns head away*

NN: OH don't act shy, we all know that's not true! Woot woot, Seto/Katsu...yesssssss >< they soon shall have each others nana...be all up in each others whipcream!

Bakura.Marik: *snicker*

NN: ^_^ Update again sooon!
person Arias5
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wowwie...Kaiba was here...*drool*
Hehe, Aren't you happy that you have such devoted readers? Well, I loved Hellraisers so you can imagine how great your sequel is ... ^__^
Grr, Cliffhangers are tortures but let your muses be free so we can have more...erm, action?! hEH...Update quickly now...I wanna find out what happens next.
*~PEACE*~
person zehlyah
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you...you...can't just leave it like that!! What happens next?!?!
Come on! You can't do this to us!!
Update soon!!!!
person aspiker
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it --> Marik and Bakura making hay while the sun shines while Ryou banishes cops to the shadows! 8-D 8-D

Go Ryou!
person Tenshi
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOoooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhh!! What's going to happen next! I need to know! I need to know!!

Great chappY!
person zehlyah
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO!! Punch the clown?!? Damnation, now I'll have to 1-up you again!

On to the next chapter!
person zehlyah
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap, Yami's a cock!
Have I told you lately how much I love this story??
Pls update soon, I can't wait to read more!!!!