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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, that was fuckin' awesome! You knew that that was going to happen at the end and that made it all the much greater. Heh, fuckin' good job. Lookin forward to 'nother update.
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thief over pharaoh any day. (looks at typed line) And that can have more than one meaning. (snicker)
That was so hot. Yami-sex in a police station. Nice to see the handcuffs used, too!
Oh, damn. I hope they get out of there before the cops see them.
That was so hot. Yami-sex in a police station. Nice to see the handcuffs used, too!
Oh, damn. I hope they get out of there before the cops see them.
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I finally caught up! Wow, i've missed quite a bit!! But now that I've read all there is to read you'd best get to updating!!
A few notes, if I may: Testicle originating life forms? LMFAO! I fucken love it! And the Seto/Jou scene? Should that have been labled "beast"? LOL Fucken hot!
GET CRACKIN! I want MORE!
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A few notes, if I may: Testicle originating life forms? LMFAO! I fucken love it! And the Seto/Jou scene? Should that have been labled "beast"? LOL Fucken hot!
GET CRACKIN! I want MORE!
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o_O *le gasp* O_o
The image of their sex will be forever imbeded in my memory!
~*peace*~
The image of their sex will be forever imbeded in my memory!
~*peace*~
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
They just had to get it on there, didn't they? But, man, that was HOTT! Great update! Wonder how they are going to get out of this. don't they ever get tired of running from the cops? It's like a freakin' daily workout for them.
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh fucking great!! I made it up to chapter 16 so far and I'm loving it!! Isis' reaction to Yami and Marik was priceless!! I'll catch up on the next chapters but in the meantime KEEP EM COMING!!
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i lovw ur story
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again, great chapter! I'm completely hooked, I love this story. And Marik and Yami...*pant* Amazing. Keep up the FABULOUS work!
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great! I love it! I found it while randomly serching around and read both the first one and this one in a week. I can't wait for more.
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is one of the best stories i ever read. You are perfect abd beside a few screw ups you know what i mean, you shouldnt worry about them. This is so awsome but i feel bad for jou, i gotta kill kiaba for what he did to him making him where a coller