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person Tanya
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fuckin fantastic!

Dishes: *smash*
Ryou/Bakura: *hot 'n' heavy*
Ryou: Oh Bakura! I love it when you do chores!
Bakura: Maybe tomorrow I'll try some vacuuming...
Ryou: GODS YES!

hehehehehe. looks like Ryou got the better yami this chapter ;) We gotta find Ishtar a way to even the score...
hope the next chapter's as hot as this one was!
person Ashla
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just a quick review this time because I have to run off out ^^ Hmm, poor lads got caaaaught! *singsong* Heehee, let's see how this turns out! Can't wait for more!
Slán slán!
~Ashla~
person bakurasgirl
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmmm...animalistic yamis....DAMN THAT WAS HOT! Who wouldn't appreciate a lemon with those two sexy bishies?
must go now...love ya
person aspiker
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great yami sex! To think, having it in the police station too. That's so like the Bakura and Marik we know and love. 8-) I'm looking forward to finding out how they get out of being discovered and being put under the jail...
person cravesuicide
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg ur good at cliff hangers.............................................the more i read the more i like.................please update soon
person cd
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ffdsfsdgdsgd
person Kugatsu
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOLOLOLOL! In a POLICE station?! The worst I've ever done was have Ryou do it at school! You truly are a master, I bow to your greatness!
person Tanya
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit - RAWK! Can't. form. sentences. Sooo hot. Guh. I hope boys have hot dirty sex on my desk when I'm a cop... *drools* Oh man...
person Lell
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bwahahahaha! Caught in the act! *Cackles* Only this story can bring out my evil side...
person Nightmare
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. Oh man this was good. I can't wait to see what kind of shit 'Kura gets into next time. If you're going to have the fuck to another song do it to Alice Coopers Poison