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person Draza
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggles hysterically* That was an awesome side story!!! *wipes tear* oh! and for what Yamiu finds that makes him scream (not like that!)..Is it a grey hair?
person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD: well id hazard a guess and say that the reason Yami is sick besides the stress with poor yugi and the hell that the oddvars are putting Bakura through its got to be the said torture session Marik though about that combined with everything else combing that with the weather conditions of Iceland not a great combo really so im guessing all that must have really brought this out of him huh hehe nice mini story btw hehe wow im suprised Bakura and Marik lived that one down course Bakura seemed to get the worse end of the deal if u ask me hehe im not for those kinda sissy parties myself its to not my style really well keep up the great work and update soon huh i hope Yami gets better soon i cant stand yugi being hurt grr i wish i could have had a crack at Sveyn and another thing shouldnt somone deal with the oddvars cuz of what happened to Yugi cuz yes thatd kinda put yugi in the spotlight but still retribution is in order for what happend to him im worried if he will even recover grr all i know is for the oddvars sakes specially "lovely"younger sister he better cuz its her fault above all others yugis going through this and if its the last thing i do ill personally make her pay if yugi dosnt pull through from this huh well gtg no JA NE ^__^
person Midnight Hope
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^___________________________________^ I luved it! I'm so glad you updated!! *jumps around* I loved the side story also! marik is sick... *sighs* I feel sorry for Yami...I know how it feels to be sick and stuff...I'm afraid to get sick though becuase my mom likes to experiment and mixed a lot of stuff together... UPDATE SOON!
person Arainaina
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good please update soon I want to know what Yami yelled at seeing
person Paulina
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great, what a story, I like it too much specialy the bonus, hope you write soon it was a long time the last time
person SakuraNeko
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. Please keep up the good work!
person letainajup
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL - I love the bonus stories you had! I am the youngest in my family and I remember my two older sisters playing tricks on me ;p So I can so relate to Bakura! I also enjoyed Marik and Bakura "kiss scebe" very funny and strangly yummy at the same time :)

Hope all is well, thanks for updating!
person kupo
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Yay! I'm glad you feel better) Man, I was so sure Dahlia was gonna get her ass kicked! *maybe later* That was funny when those kids called Annar fat. *he does eat alot* I just luv your side stories!! My favorite was the one when they dressed him up like a girl!
person IYYashi
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No offense I loved the chapter, but I think I enjoyed the side stories better. My gut started hurting from laughing so much. They were so cute as kids. My favorite part was when they dressed Bakura in girl's clothes. I wish they had cameras then, it would be perfect! Ha! I love this story line. I really do. Those three brothers are great! I'm thinking of going backa re-reading the whole thing. C ya!
person Jessica
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Those two bonus stories were a great way to top off your return to AFF! That was friggin' hilarious!...Stupid Seto! Don't anger the Pineapple King right after you got away virtually unscathed!...and chibi Yami and Marik are so mean to lil 'Kura! Serves them right for getting tricked!...And I just love Annar...how he tried to help Keith! Granted, Keith was a slimy asshole in the first story, but in this one, he is far more lovable! My sick and sappy side wants him and Duke get together..I KNOW, I'm sick in the head!...O.O...my therapist says it twice a week...and I loved the fight between Seto and Marik! Who do you think would have won? I say Seto but only 'cuz I love him!...anyhoo, just wanted to say, 'What a wonderful comeback!'...I'm sure your doggie is sitting with you in spirit! Ja! ^-^