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You are so talented! To come back after so long and pick up where you left flawlessly...beautiful! Reading the first scene made me squeal with ecstasy!...I was totally wondering when Jou would be comfortable to sleep with Seto again and it just fell in my lap! ^___________^
...I thought the idea of Yami getting sick was hilarious; he is such a baby about it!...And when I came to the lamb, I was like, 'NO! NOT THE LAMB!...' before it even came to Marik!...which also aroused a similar reaction when Malik said Yugi could sleep with Yugi...I was like, 'you shouldn't be worried about being eaten, you should be wary of that 'buffalo' that's keeping you company!'...Yugi definitely fits into the category of 'small woodland creatures'...*snigger*...and the bonus story definitely made up for that minor little cliffie! I was laughing my arse off at the idea that Bakura and Marik were willing participants in drag!...I would have loved to see 'Brunhilde' and 'Mildri'!...Everything was an absolute hoot! I loved it! Thanks for the update and I'll see ya next chapter!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY CHIBI MIZU!

Kudos to you and the new chapter! *Claps* Yami hasn't gotten sick in either stories has he? That was unexpected. I love the new side story. Those things always make me laugh.

Holy shit, that little story on the end was BRILLIANT!!! I laughed out loud more than once, and that is no easy thing to make me do!!! Well done!!!

great update the short story was soo funny i could not stop laughing ,

The chapter was great. But I adored the side story! It was hilarious! Bakura and Marik in a dress, getting hit on by men! And I could completely see Bakura (even though Ryou is more feminine and would look better in a dress) in a dress and damn was he cute! Marik, was a bit scary. He should never do that again. Okay, I think I've said my piece except, there hasn't been a Bakura/Ryou lemon in a long, long time and I love them (Even if Bakura is a jerk sometimes) so I was wondering when the next one is? Okay, C ya! Can't wait for your next update!

I usually say update more often, then we wouldn't get a nice long chapter with a bonus! I loved this! I loved how Marik got hounded by that crowd. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!! I hope Yami gets better soon!

I love the bonus story. I think Bakura would make a nice looking female! HAHAH!!!

*plummets down from chair* OMFG! That story the bonus one, was so brilliant. XDDDDD
As to the main chapter, how the heck did Yami get sick? Maybe it was in some of the blood when he botched that evil oddvar. You left a horrible cliffeeee with that scream, I'm so anxious to know!

*huggles you*

Yay another update!!^^ This is my favorite story on aff, and the side story was totally awesome! I hope you find time to update soon!

Why do I have a feeling it has to do with his age? Did he spot white hair or what?
But damn, that's my third cliffhanger of the day, I'm off from fanfiction for the rest of the day, that's just too much :(