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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! I'm glad Yami's not as mad at him as before. I thought he was gonna get beat up again. Malik's story made me sad. But, I read that before the pipe dreams so I better afterwards. update asap!!!
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't like that Yami beat up Yugi so bad. I hope that Yami will forgive yugi and feel so bad for hurting him. I also hope that they get their son back safe and sound. and up date soon
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn! Yami didn't have to beat him that bad. Now I'm all upset. *sniff* Update soon, I wanna know if Annar's ok!!
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo, the chase is on!...I'm loving every minute of this!...This is truly turning into one brilliant epic!...I hope to see some serious Bakura/Ryou action in this next part! Great work! ^_^
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that poor child!!! oh no will yami get him back soon i hope and poor yugi how could yami hurt him so much great story so far keep it up please!!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa.... Yami did a number on Yugi... I can't believe he beat the crap out of Yugi like that.. I mean yea true they disobeyed but I mean Yugi didn't mean to lose Annar like that I just hope they find him and hopefully Yami will forgive Yugi. Anyway very good please update soon
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Geeze! I don't think there will be any reconciliation between Yami Yuugi. Oh my! Brutal! I enjoyed this chapter anyway and look forward to the next!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was certainly unexpected! I love how you can keep this interesting chapter after chapter :D
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD: GOD DAM THAT SON OF A FUCKING BITCH I'll never forgive those Oddvar's NEVER THIS IS ALL THERE FUCKING FAULT thanks to them Yugi has been hurt and now Annar's been kiddnapped Ill never forgive those SONS OF A GOD DAM FUCKING BITCH *grabs her scimitars and slices the Oddvar's to ribbons again and again and again 50,000 times and then sends there souls to burn and rot in hell till they are consumed with pain for an entire eternity* huh I'll never forgive them I'm sorry if my language could use a little tuning but I can't stand it I absolutely hate it whenever Yami raises his hand at Yugi its not right its not fair its down right repulsive please update asap I need to see Yami forgive Yugi I need to see that boy smile again and I need to see Yami regret striking Yugi pls update asap gtg now JA NE
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yugi...I hope Yami forgives Yugi. He must forgive. Please update as soon as you can. Ja ne