AFF Fiction Portal
person Camille
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
One story and seventeen chapters later, Bakura finally wakes up and confesses his love to Ryo! Idiot! It took him that long????? I am going to have to smack him with a pineapple!!
person Paranoid
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
first of all, I will say I love your fic and I been reading it since you started, BUT WHAT IN THE BLOODY HELL?! ryou is such a whore! he fucked with his best friend's husband!! there is not a freaking excuse for that! I really deslike ryou! and now I hate him! for the love of the gods! and the worst thing is that he gets a "I love you' yeah sure! 'I love you after you fucked with my brother that was already married!' not only that after all he did he just spreads his legs again! thats just!...he is such a whore this time! I swear knowing Malik he would have stab him to dead! and now everyone thinks that Malik is the bad one when ryou was the slut that started everything! I love your fic once again I tell you this...but this time...this ish just....horrible...
person Carol
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh god no that can't be good would malik hurt ryou like yami hunted yugi will this end they friendship!!! god no please no more hate to ryou the poor thing could not take it!
person Carol
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh god no that can't be good would malik hurt ryou like yami hunted yugi will this end they friendship!!! god no please no more hate to ryou the poor thing could not take it!
person letainajup
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! OMG! That was soooo hot even though it was wrong between Marik and Ryou! Just as bad as seeing the 2 bros at it - lol! *shakes head* NO NO IT"S WRONG! >_< Awesome chapter, hilarious and a drama and smut, just how I like it! I need to know what's gonna happen now that Malik walked in, or if Bakura will find out?! Ooo I can't wait!
person Midnight Hope
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Midnight: OMG!! O_O I can't wait until the next chapter!!! ^-^; it's been awhile since I've been on I know... *sighs* it's good to be back!
person kupo
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! Mailk's gonna kick Ryou's ass!!! I hope Bakura dosen't find out. I loved the bonus story.. i thought it was cute in a weird way. But why did they need snow?? Update soon!!
person Dani Wheeler-Kaiba
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GODS!!!

I just read the entire Viking Brothers and Danegold stories...they rock!! I feel so damn sorry for Ryou. BAKURA, YOU MAY BE MY FAVOURITE CHARACTER, BUT GET YOUR HEAD OUT OF YOUR ASS AND LOVE HIM ALREADY!! Do you know how FRIGGIN SCARED I was at the end of that chapter? You - you ended it at Malik walking in!! I don't know who to be horrified at...Marik or Ryou...I love Ryou so I can't blame him, but it definitely wasn't Marik's fault...aaaaaah! Must - find - next chapter!

The bonus stories make me laugh like hell. Especially the first pineapple one, and that last one with the aliens. So THAT'S why Bakura's crazy about his pineapple and coconut things!! I love Annar. Keep on biting! And I love Avaldamon. Keep on deflowering those virgin mares! Haha he's so much like Marik it's hilarious...

*hyperventilates* Okay...well...I'll live...as long as you update soon!! PLEASE! YOU DON'T WANT MY DEATH ON YOUR CONSCIENCE!!!
person Spidy007
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! u updated! kool, nice work! update soon!
person yaoigoddess
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD! *dies* I loved the bonus story! That was great

But, oh! Why did Malik have to walk in? Ryou better start acting! Make it seem that he was forced. The whole time I was screaming "Don't do it! Push him off! Scream! Remember to S.I.N.G!"

*cries* Things are going so bad for them. Especially Ryou. He really doesn't need this. He's too gentle. Maybe he should run away. After all, he is English. So he wouldn't get in trouble.

Btw, I have been wondering. Has Yugi slept with Yami since that night? It's been a few months, but you haven't mentioned a thing about it. So I was curious. T_T My poor little Yugi. Having to go through that.

And what about Annar? Is he ok? Does he miss his parents, or are did those bastards who took him brainwash him or something to make him forget about Yugi and Yami? T_____________T sooo sad

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

and HAPPY HOLIDAYS!